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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and•Give you v.2

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and•Give you v. 2
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I’m writing this letter to you for applying for the job of quality assurance manager. I recently joined the 2016-2018 batch of business administration. My work experience and qualification definitely suits me for this job. I am studying MBA program at the university and wanted to work concurrently. The courses which were offered also include subject dedicatedly referring to quality assurance management programs. Before joining for Master’s in the university, I have worked as a project manager in the multi-national software company where I had leaded a team of 20 people. Whole product delivery was done under my supervision. In addition, Client and employee relationship and introducing new strategies which can improve the quality, efficiency and effectiveness of the code. I have an experience of 13 years out of which I’ve delivered the best as project lead for 5 years. I would be really grateful to you if you could consider me for this job. Any time, I’m available for interview. Thank you for considering. I look forward to meeting you in near future. Yours Sincerely Tanul
Dear Sir,

Hope you are doing well. I’m writing this letter to you for applying for the job of quality assurance manager. I recently
joined
the 2016-2018 batch of business administration. My work experience and qualification definitely suits me for this job.

I am studying MBA
program
at the university and wanted to work
concurrently
. The courses which
were offered
also
include subject
dedicatedly
referring to quality assurance management programs.

Before
joining for Master’s in the university, I have worked as a project manager in the multi-national software
company
where I had leaded a team of 20
people
. Whole product delivery
was done
under my supervision.
In addition
, Client and employee relationship and introducing new strategies which can
improve
the quality, efficiency and effectiveness of the code. I have an experience of 13 years out of which I’ve delivered the best as project lead for 5 years.

I would be
really
grateful to you if you could consider me for this job. Any time, I’m available for interview.

Thank you for considering. I look forward to meeting you in near future.

Yours
Sincerely


Tanul
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and•Give you v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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