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You and your friend have recently purchased tickets for a theatrical performance in advance. However, you can’t make it due to some personal reasons. You have decided to apologise to your friend as you can’t make it to the theatre with him. Write a lett v.2

You and your friend have recently purchased tickets for a theatrical performance in advance. However, you can’t make it due to some personal reasons. You have decided to apologise to your friend as you can’t make it to the theatre with him. Write a lett v. 2
Dear John, I am extremely sorry to let you know that I won' t be able to come to " The City Hall" on Sunday to attend the comedy drama of Kapil Sharma. I can understand that you will not at all appreciate my decision, as we booked the tickets month ago after several discussions. Actually, I have to go to Guwahati due to some official work on Friday evening, and I won' t be able to return by next Friday. I have tried to postpone the official work, but I am unable to manage this. As you know, recently our company has launched a product in Guwahati, and one of our customer has faced tremendous issue with this product. Management has decided me to attend this complain before it' s too late, as customer satisfaction is the priority these days. Do you remember Tanya, whom you met on my last birthday party? She is a big fan of Kapil, and she wanted to attend this show. However, she could not manage to purchase ticket due to rush. She will attend this performance instead of me, and I hope will enjoy her company. Best regards, Bibhu Kalita.
Dear John,

I am
extremely
sorry to
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let
you know that I
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won&
#039; t be able to
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come
to
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&quot
; The City
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Hall&quot
; on Sunday to
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attend
the comedy drama of
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Kapil
Sharma. I can understand that you will not at all appreciate my decision, as we booked the
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "tickets'" or "ticket's"?
tickets
month ago after several discussions.

Actually, I
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have to
go to Guwahati due to
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some
official work on Friday evening, and I
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won&
#039; t be able to return by
next
Friday. I have tried to postpone the official work,
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but
I am unable to manage this. As you know, recently our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has launched a product in Guwahati, and one of our customer has faced tremendous issue with this product. Management has decided me to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attend
The verb 'complain' is plural. Did you mean: "this complains"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this complain
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before
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it&
#039; s too late, as customer satisfaction is the priority these days.

Do you remember Tanya, whom you met on my last birthday party? She is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
fan of
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Kapil
, and she wanted to
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attend
this
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show
.
However
, she could not manage to
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purchase
ticket due to rush. She will
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attend
this performance
instead
of me, and I hope will enjoy her
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company
.

Best regards,

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Bibhu
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Kalita
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS letter You and your friend have recently purchased tickets for a theatrical performance in advance. However, you can’t make it due to some personal reasons. You have decided to apologise to your friend as you can’t make it to the theatre with him. Write a lett v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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