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A local college is having an international day You want to speak to students about your country from different cultures Write a letter to the college head In the letter you should tell him her about the topics you are going to talk about why would they be v.2

A local college is having an international day You want to speak to students about your country from different cultures Write a letter to the college head In the letter you should tell him her about the topics you are going to talk about why would they be v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding “The international day” which is going to be held on 1st May 2019. I have come to know that a speech competition will be organized on this special day. However, each candidate must go through a screening test prior to the final competition. I have keen interest in this event and I want to represent my county. As my country, India, is known for its diversity, therefore I want to discuss about the unity in diversity of my country. India has not only diverse climate but also more than 1600 dialects. I am quite sure that students will be surprise to know our unity in such a diverse culture. Moreover, an astonishing fact is that after every 100 KMs, our culture in terms of cuisine, attire and language changes. I need few supports from organizing committee that a large size poster of India and few drawing pins will be required, as I want to make my presentation little bit interesting by conducting a small quiz at the end. Looking forward to hearing from you about my final selection as soon as possible because I need time to prepare my topic. Thanks in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Bibhu Kalita.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to you regarding “The international day” which is going to
be held
on 1st May 2019. I have
come
to know that a speech competition will
be organized
on this special day.
However
, each candidate
must
go through a screening
test
prior to the final competition. I have keen interest in this
event
and I want to represent my county. As my country, India,
is known
for its diversity,
therefore
I want to
discuss about the
unity in diversity of my country.

India has not
only
diverse climate
but
also
more than 1600 dialects. I am quite sure that students will be surprise to know our unity in such a diverse culture.
Moreover
, an astonishing fact is that after every 100
KMs
, our culture in terms of cuisine, attire and language
changes
.

I need few supports from organizing committee that a large size poster of India and few drawing pins will
be required
, as I want to
make
my presentation
little bit
interesting by conducting a
small
quiz at the
end
.

Looking forward to hearing from you about my final selection as
soon
as possible
because
I need time to prepare my topic. Thanks in anticipation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Bibhu
Kalita
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
The man who does not know other languages, unless he is a man of genius, necessarily has deficiencies in his ideas.
Victor Hugo

IELTS letter A local college is having an international day You want to speak to students about your country from different cultures Write a letter to the college head In the letter you should tell him her about the topics you are going to talk about why would they be v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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