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You and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him. In the letter, you should: apologiesexplain what reasons you can’t make itgive options what can be done with the ticket. v.2

You and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him. In the letter, you should: apologiesexplain what reasons you can’t make itgive options what can be done with the ticket. v. 2
Dear Ankush, I am writing to apologize for not accompanying you tomorrow for the theatre show, which we have pre-booked a week ago. I am extremely sorry to inform you about this at last moment. Unfortunately, my foot tripped and I fell sideways when I was going to grocery yesterday. I tried to get up but could not stand. Later, I realized I had sprained my ankle. Thanks to those kind persons who were there. They helped me to get up and took me to doctor in vicinity. Doctor has highly recommended to rest for two days for speedy recovery. That is why I am unable to walk and join you. At the same time, I understand your love for the theatre and how excited you are to watch this show. Therefore, I asked my brother to accompany you tomorrow and he agreed. This way we need not to bother for ticket cancellation and refund. Lastly, I would say don' t worry about me. I would be fine in two days. Once again sorry for not making it this time. Hope you won' t mind. Enjoy and have lots of fun. Best wishes, Ell Green
Dear
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Ankush
,

I am writing to apologize for not accompanying you tomorrow for the
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theatre
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show
, which we have pre-booked a week ago.

I am
extremely
sorry to inform you about this at last moment. Unfortunately, my foot tripped and I fell sideways when I was going to grocery yesterday. I tried to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
could not stand. Later, I realized I had sprained my ankle. Thanks to those kind persons who were there. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up and took me to doctor in vicinity. Doctor has
highly
The verb 'recommended' is used with the gerund form: "recommended resting".
recommended to rest
for two days for speedy recovery.
That is
why I am unable to walk and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
you.

At the same time, I understand your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
for the
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theatre
and how excited you are to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
.
Therefore
, I asked my brother to accompany you
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tomorrow and
he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
. This way we need not
Did you mean "bother"?
to bother
for ticket cancellation and refund.
Lastly
, I would say
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don&
#039; t worry about me. I would be fine in two days.

Once again sorry for not making it this time. Hope you
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won&
#039; t mind.

Enjoy and have lots of fun.

Best wishes,

Ell Green
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter You and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him. In the letter, you should: apologiesexplain what reasons you can’t make itgive options what can be done with the ticket. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
194 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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