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You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. v. 1

Dear Eric, Hope you are doing great. It's been only two weeks since I last saw you and it already feels like a year! I am writing to offer you a concert ticket that I purchased a few days ago. As I can't make it to the concert, I thought you should go. On November 7th, Guns N' Roses is coming to Oakland to rock the city. The full team would be on the stage and it would be a 4 hours' blast at the Oakland Coliseum. I did not want to miss my favourite band's live performance and purchased a ticket. Unfortunately, I will have to cancel it due to a sudden family tour to Canada during the time to meet my grandparents on their 50th wedding anniversary. I know how much you revere Guns N' Roses and that's why I would like you to enjoy the concert. I did not want to disappoint my parents and dishearten my grandmother, who is eagerly expecting me on their marriage anniversary. I will give the ticket to David, who is also going to the concert, and you can meet him prior to the concert to collect it. Do not forget to record the performance and share your experience with me when I get back and meet you. Take care and have fun. Warm regards, Robert

IELTS letter You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. v.1

Dear Eric, Hope you are doing great. It's been
only
two weeks since I last
saw
you and it already feels like a year! I am writing to offer you a
concert
ticket that I
purchased
a few days ago. As I can't
make
it to the
concert
, I
thought
you should go. On November 7th, Guns N' Roses is coming to Oakland to rock the city. The full team would be on the stage and it would be a 4 hours' blast at the Oakland Coliseum. I did not want to miss my
favourite
band's
live
performance and
purchased
a ticket. Unfortunately, I will
have to
cancel it due to a sudden family tour to Canada during the time to
meet
my grandparents on their 50th wedding anniversary. I know how much you revere Guns N' Roses and that's why I would like you to enjoy the
concert
. I did not want to disappoint my parents and dishearten my grandmother, who is
eagerly
expecting me on their
marriage
anniversary.
I
will give the ticket to David, who is
also
going to the
concert
, and you can
meet
him prior to the
concert
to collect it. Do not forget to record the performance and share your experience with me when I
get
back and
meet
you. Take care and have fun. Warm regards, Robert
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
Letter
8 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≤ 6
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