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IELTS General Training - Writing Task IYou have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qu v.2

IELTS General Training - Writing Task IYou have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qu v. 2
Dear Sir, I came across an advertisement in the morning newspaper about your language center and the courses offered. From the adverts, I could see that your language school is going to start an evening class for English language learners. Being a working professional, your course seems to fit my requirements. Therefore, I am writing you to get additional information about the course. As mentioned, I am very keen to improve my English language skills as I intend to go abroad for higher education. You may see from this letter that I have some sort of knowledge of English language but I need to get a good score in IELTS exam. Therefore, I would like to improve my language with a native speaker. I therefore, request you to provide me further details about the course. I would appreciate if you could write me in my email the duration of the course, applicable fees and the date of commencement of the course. Could you please also send me an electronic copy of information booklet in my email? I look forward to receiving information at the earliest. Regards, A
Dear Sir,

I came across an advertisement in the morning newspaper about your
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language
center and the
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courses
offered. From the adverts, I could
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see
that your
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language
school is going to
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start
an evening
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class
for English
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language
learners. Being a working professional, your
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course
seems to fit my requirements.
Therefore
, I am writing you to
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get
additional information about the course.

As mentioned, I am
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very
keen to
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improve
my English
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language
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skills
as I intend to go abroad for higher education. You may
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see
from this letter that I have
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some
sort of knowledge of English
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language
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but
I need to
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get
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
score in IELTS exam.
Therefore
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
with a native speaker.

I
therefore
, request you to provide me
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I would appreciate if you could write me in my email the duration of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, applicable fees and the date of commencement of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me an electronic copy of information booklet in my email?

I look forward to receiving information at the earliest.

Regards,

A
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
To have another language is to possess a second soul.
Charlemagne

IELTS letter IELTS General Training - Writing Task IYou have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qu v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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