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A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for a feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the c v.6

A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for a feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the c v. 6
Dear Manager, I am aware that a lucrative company like Amazon has taken social responsibility initiatives to help the children with a sports aid or free of cost entertainment to the citizens. I am very glad! It is axiomatic; obviously true that your charity will foster sportsmanship among the students who put in arduous efforts to win medals in the past and there is good chance now that they can metamorphose to future star athletes once they get a chance to play in international games two years in a row. This proposal is inspiring! Besides, we have a small arena where the local musicians play different genders of tantalising i. e. interesting and modern music every festive season. Also, the two hotels locally conduct music concerts frequently and the tickets are not so expensive. I sincerely doubt if there is any benefit for you here as you can see the monsoons are soon going to arrive where accretions of stagnated water and debris is inevitable making it inhospitable to host a show. I would like to vote for sports sponsorship as this will make our town renown in case of a victory. Regards, Yasaswi
Dear Manager,

I am aware that a lucrative
company
like Amazon has taken social responsibility initiatives to
help
the children with a sports aid or free of cost entertainment to the citizens. I am
very
glad!

It is axiomatic;
obviously
true that your charity will foster sportsmanship among the students who put in arduous efforts to win medals in the past and there is
good
chance
now
that they can metamorphose to future star athletes once they
get
a chance to play in international games two years in a row. This proposal is inspiring!

Besides
, we have a
small
arena where the local musicians play
different
genders of
tantalising
i. e.
interesting and modern music every festive season.
Also
, the two hotels
locally
conduct music concerts
frequently
and the tickets are not
so
expensive. I
sincerely
doubt if there is any benefit for you here as you can
see
the monsoons are
soon
going to arrive where accretions of stagnated water and debris is inevitable making it inhospitable to host a
show
.

I would like to vote for sports sponsorship as this will
make
our town renown in case of a victory.

Regards,

Yasaswi
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for a feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the c v. 6

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