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New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: explain that they are preventing you from studying wellsuggest what they can do to v.2

New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: explain that they are preventing you from studying wellsuggest what they can do to v. 2

Dear Mr and Mrs Tim, I’m writing to you with displeasure due to the noise at night from your flat since the past 3 weeks since you moved in. I have been finding it so difficult to study for my examination, which is coming up next week; It is getting me worried because I cannot meet up with my studies. I’d like that you suspend all loud music while partying; you can rent the sound proof hall next to the supermarket across the street. Let me know how much it will possibly cost, I am willing to pay the rent until my exams are over. Just let me know ahead when you are likely going to have a loud night. My exams will last for a month, from the 10th of August to the 10 th of September 2019. This is my final examination and I would not like to fail. I look forward to a positive response change. Best regards, Lambert.

Dear Mr and Mrs Tim,

I’m writing to you with displeasure due to the noise at night from your flat since the past 3 weeks since you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in.

I have been finding it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 difficult to study for my examination, which is coming up next
 week; It is getting me worried This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 up with my studies.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’d like that you suspend all loud music while partying; you can rent the sound proof hall next
 to the supermarket across the street. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know how much it will possibly
 cost, I am willing to pay the rent until my exams are over. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know ahead when you are likely going to have a loud night.

My exams will last for a month, from the 10th of August to the Did you mean "10th"?10th
10 th
 of September 2019. This is my final examination and I would not like to fail.

I look forward to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
.

Best regards,

Lambert. 

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: explain that they are preventing you from studying wellsuggest what they can do to v. 2

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

162 words

6.5

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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