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New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: explain that they are preventing you from studying wellsuggest what they can do to v.2

New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: explain that they are preventing you from studying wellsuggest what they can do to v. 2
Dear Mr and Mrs Tim, I’m writing to you with displeasure due to the noise at night from your flat since the past 3 weeks since you moved in. I have been finding it so difficult to study for my examination, which is coming up next week; It is getting me worried because I cannot meet up with my studies. I’d like that you suspend all loud music while partying; you can rent the sound proof hall next to the supermarket across the street. Let me know how much it will possibly cost, I am willing to pay the rent until my exams are over. Just let me know ahead when you are likely going to have a loud night. My exams will last for a month, from the 10th of August to the 10 th of September 2019. This is my final examination and I would not like to fail. I look forward to a positive response change. Best regards, Lambert.
Dear Mr and Mrs Tim,

I’m writing to you with displeasure due to the noise at night from your flat since the past 3 weeks since you
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moved
in.

I have been finding it
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so
difficult to study for my examination, which is coming up
next
week; It is getting me worried
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because
I cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
up with my studies.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’d like that you suspend all loud music while partying; you can rent the sound proof hall
next
to the supermarket across the street.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know how much it will
possibly
cost, I am willing to pay the rent until my exams are over.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know ahead when you are likely going to have a loud night.

My exams will last for a month, from the 10th of August to the
Did you mean "10th"?
10 th
of September 2019. This is my final examination and I would not like to fail.

I look forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
.

Best regards,

Lambert.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: explain that they are preventing you from studying wellsuggest what they can do to v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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