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Write to a friend about your new job. 1) explain why you decided to look for a new job. 2) Describe how you looked for a new job. 3) Describe your new job. v. 2

​Hi Leena, How are you? Hope you are doing well. Do you remember? Last week, you were asking about my new job that I recently got in an MNC. I discussed with you two months back that I was not satisfied with my earlier HR job. Neither it was offering me new career opportunities to grow in my role nor was paying me well off as per the market standards. Therefore, I decided to change it. Cracking a job in an MNC was not a cakewalk; however, I managed to get it through my sheer hard work and references. Not only I uploaded my CV on various job portals but also personally contacted different HR heads through LinkedIn to get a spotlight on my résumé. After giving various attempts, I can click this job. Now, I am working as a Senior Manager in an Accenture company. Here, I will handle three regions, including South, North & West, and I will be responsible for developing training and compensation programs for new joiners. Just let me know If you need any details about it. I would be glad to address it. Take care and see you soon. Anika

IELTS letter Write to a friend about your new job. 1) explain why you decided to look for a new job. 2) Describe how you looked for a new job. 3) Describe your new job. v.2

​Hi
Leena
, How are you? Hope you are doing well. Do you remember? Last week, you were asking about my new
job
that I recently
got
in an
MNC
. I discussed with you two months back that I was not satisfied with my earlier HR
job
. Neither it was offering me new career opportunities to grow in my role nor was paying me well off as per the market standards.
Therefore
, I decided to
change
it. Cracking a
job
in an
MNC
was not a cakewalk;
however
, I managed to
get
it through my sheer
hard
work and references. Not
only
I uploaded my CV on various
job
portals
but
also
personally
contacted
different
HR heads through LinkedIn to
get
a spotlight on my résumé. After giving various attempts, I can click this
job
.
Now
, I am working as a Senior Manager in an Accenture
company
. Here, I will handle three regions, including South, North
&amp
; West, and I will be responsible for developing training and compensation programs for new joiners.
Just
let
me know If you need any
details
about it. I would be glad to address it. Take care and
see
you
soon
.
Anika
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
Letter
7 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≥ 7
  • Band score ≤ 6
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