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A staff member of a hotel has helped you in a difficult situation. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. What was the problem? What has happened? What should be done by the manager? v.2

A staff member of a hotel has helped you in a difficult situation. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. What was the problem? What has happened? What should be done by the manager? v. 2
Dear sir, I am writing to express my gratitude for the assistance received by one of your employees, during my recent visit to your hotel. Last Friday, I have had dinner out with my family, in your restaurant. The meal was scrumptious but, we had trouble with our car, afterward. Though the car has broken down in the hotel car parking, we were unable to find the exact cause for the same. Nevertheless, all of us were stood in front of the hotel gate to find a cab, but could not find the one due to the bad weather. Fortunately, one of your staff members, Andrew, suddenly come to us and listen to our situation. He has called 24-hour roadside assistance to repair our car and give shelter to my family members for a little time in the hotel. Within a few minutes, we got our car repaired, however, we could not find Andrew again in the hotel to pay our regards. Nonetheless, I would solely request you to appreciate him for his care towards the customers. He was the only person who helped us out from the panic situation. Kindly send me the contact details of him so that I would be able to show my gratitude personally. Anxiously looking for your response. Yours faithfully, Mathew Woods
Dear sir,

I am writing to express my gratitude for the assistance received by one of your employees, during my recent visit to your hotel.

Last Friday, I have had dinner out with my family, in your restaurant. The meal was scrumptious
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but
, we had trouble with our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, afterward. Though the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
has broken down in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
parking, we were unable to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
the exact cause for the same.

Nevertheless
, all of us
were stood
in front of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
gate to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
a cab,
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but
could not
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find
the one due to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
weather.
Fortunately
, one of your staff members, Andrew,
suddenly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to us and listen to our situation. He has called 24-hour roadside assistance to repair our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
and give shelter to my family members for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
time in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
. Within a few minutes, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
repaired,
however
, we could not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
Andrew again in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
to pay our regards.

Nonetheless, I would
solely
request you to appreciate him for his care towards the customers. He was the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
person who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
us out from the panic situation. Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the contact
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of him
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I would be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
my gratitude
personally
.

Anxiously
looking for your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mathew Woods
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter A staff member of a hotel has helped you in a difficult situation. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. What was the problem? What has happened? What should be done by the manager? v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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