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Write a letter to your local council to complain about the street lights, which are not working. • Why you are writingHow long the problem has been going on forWhen you would like them to fix itHow they can contact you to respond v.2

Write a letter to your local council to complain about the street lights, which are not working. • Why you are writingHow long the problem has been going on forWhen you would like them to fix itHow they can contact you to respond v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to you to express my concern and anxiety over the increase in road accident in cities of Canada. local people want to make more light for night road It is very regrettable that we have thrown caution to the winds and are rather insensible while driving or walking on the roads. The rise in total number of road accident in the past six years is nitrification enough that it is nothing but our negligence and breaking of basic traffic rules that has led to this regular rise in the number of accidents. I sincerely hope you will publish my letter in your esteemed newspaper so as to create public awareness and concern about the need for safety roads. also less light cause road kill animal, crush with people acident and other crimes too. Please manage the road conditions and try to improve the roads accident Problems and also try to improve light condition. Your faithfully. Cindy.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to you to express my concern and anxiety over the increase in
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road
accident in cities of Canada.
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local
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people
want to
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make
more light for night
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road


It is
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very
regrettable that we have thrown caution to the winds and are
rather
insensible while driving or walking on the
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roads
. The rise in total number of
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road
accident in the past six years is nitrification
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enough
that it is nothing
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but
our negligence and breaking of basic traffic
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rules
that has led to this regular rise in the number of accidents.

I
sincerely
hope you will publish my letter in your esteemed newspaper
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so as to
create public awareness and concern about the need for safety
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roads
.
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also
less light cause
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road
kill animal, crush with
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people
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acident
and other crimes too.

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Please
manage the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
conditions and try to
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improve
the
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roads
accident Problems and
also
try to
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improve
light condition.

Your
faithfully
.

Cindy.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your local council to complain about the street lights, which are not working. • Why you are writingHow long the problem has been going on forWhen you would like them to fix itHow they can contact you to respond v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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