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Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: - Introduce yourself- Explain what is the problem is- Suggest solution to the problem v.2

Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: - Introduce yourself- Explain what is the problem is- Suggest solution to the problem v. 2
Dear Sir, My self Milan Desai, I am loyal resident of city council since last 10 years. I live at Park Street lane in Bradford area. I am writing this epistle to you regarding disturbance caused by construction of new lane in my neighborhood area. As I am already aware about the redevelopment plans of city council to make this place beautiful to live but it also creating a lot of inconvenience for the local residents too. Firstly, I would like to inform you that the contractor had parked his heavy equipment just outside my front gate. Due to this, I am not able to park my car in my garage. Besides this, the construction work is going from last three months, which made it completely impossible for our children to play in the nearest garden, especially near the proposed alternative route. I request you to speed up the construction process and I also want you to take severe actions against contractor for unnecessary delay in the project work. I look forward to your prompt action and response in resolving the matter above. Yours Sincerely, Milan Desai.
Dear Sir,

My self Milan
Desai
, I am loyal resident of city council since last 10 years. I
live
at Park Street lane in Bradford area. I am writing this epistle to you regarding disturbance caused by construction of new lane in my neighborhood area. As I am already aware about the redevelopment plans of city council to
make
this place
beautiful
to
live
but
it
also
creating
a lot of
inconvenience for the local residents too.

Firstly
, I would like to inform you that the contractor had parked his heavy equipment
just
outside my front gate. Due to this, I am not able to park my car in my garage.
Besides
this, the construction work is going from last three months, which made it completely impossible for our children to play in the nearest garden,
especially
near the proposed alternative route.

I request you to
speed up
the construction process and I
also
want you to take severe actions against contractor for unnecessary delay in the project work.

I look forward to your prompt action and response in resolving the matter above.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Milan
Desai
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: - Introduce yourself- Explain what is the problem is- Suggest solution to the problem v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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