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Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party Why you want to give the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant question v.2

Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party Why you want to give the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant question v. 2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am sadhana wale, I am a frequent of your restaurant. I know this restaurant is very popular in Bopal for its testy food and quality. I am writing this letter to you to book restaurant' s banquet hall for party on 2nd of April. The party is on the occasion of my son' s first birthday. There will be fifty guests attending this party. Hence food and sitting arrangements need to be done accordingly. I have something in my mind about the decorations. I would like to decorate the cake cutting table with beautiful flowers and the stage shall be decorated by my son' s photos, which I will give you. I also like to decide a menu of the party. In that I would like to add some popular Maharashtrian food items and like to add shrikhand in sweet dish which is my son' s favorite dish. I would also request a corner reserved for DJ and the dance floor for the children. I will be free to discuss the cost of the entire arrangement over the weekend. Kindly let me know a suitable time to visit you at the restaurant on the weekend so that we can discuss these details. Looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, sadhana.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
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sadhana
wale, I am
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a frequent of
your
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restaurant
. I know this
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restaurant
is
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very
popular in
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Bopal
for its testy food and quality.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to you to book
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restaurant&
#039; s banquet hall for
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party
on 2nd of April.

The
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party
is on the occasion of my
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son&
#039; s
first
birthday. There will be fifty guests attending this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
food and sitting arrangements need to
be done
accordingly
. I have something in my mind about the decorations. I would like to decorate the cake cutting table with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
flowers and the stage shall
be decorated
by my
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son&
#039; s photos, which I will give you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
like to decide a menu of the
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party
. In that I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
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some
popular
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Maharashtrian
food items and like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
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shrikhand
in sweet dish which is my
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son&
#039; s favorite dish. I would
also
request a corner reserved for DJ and the dance floor for the children.

I will be free to discuss the cost of the entire arrangement over the weekend. Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know a suitable time to visit you at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
on the weekend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we can discuss these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.

Looking forward to your response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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sadhana
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party Why you want to give the party What special arrangements you will need Any relevant question v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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