Dear Baljeet,
I hope you and your family are in good health and spirit. It’s been a long time since we met. I just thought I’d write to let you know that I am selling my old television as I bought a new Samsung(52 inches, full HD) tv recently. As I remember the last time we met, you were looking for an old TV online. I would like to offer you mine since it’s in a very good condition and fits your requirements.
My old television is just 3 years old and has never got any complaint. It’s a 32-inch Sony LCD screen with blue-tooth and HDMI connectivity. It is under the company' s warranty that covers 10 years after purchase. All the bills are a warranty card is with us. The TV has a good sound quality and also has a USB port.
If you are still searching for one and my television fits your requirements, you can see it anytime by next weekend. The price can be discussed once you like it.
waiting for your reply.
Bhawna Sharma
Dear
Baljeet
,
I hope you and your family are in
good
health and spirit. It’s been a long time since we met. I
just
thought
I’d write to
let
you know that I am selling my
old
television as I
bought
a new Samsung(
52 inches
, full HD)
tv
recently. As I remember the last time we met, you were looking for an
old
TV online. I would like to offer you mine since it’s in a
very
good
condition and fits your requirements.
My
old
television is
just
3 years
old
and has never
got
any complaint. It’s a 32-inch Sony LCD screen with blue-tooth and HDMI connectivity. It is under the
company&
#039; s warranty that covers 10 years after
purchase
. All the bills are a warranty card is with us. The TV has a
good
sound quality and
also
has a USB port.
If you are
still
searching for one and my television fits your requirements, you can
see
it anytime by
next
weekend. The price can
be discussed
once you like it.
waiting
for your reply.
Bhawna
Sharma
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