Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain: 1. Why you are selling the television2. Describe the television3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it v.7

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain: 1. Why you are selling the television2. Describe the television3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it v. 7
Dear Baljeet, I hope you and your family are in good health and spirit. It’s been a long time since we met. I just thought I’d write to let you know that I am selling my old television as I bought a new Samsung(52 inches, full HD) tv recently. As I remember the last time we met, you were looking for an old TV online. I would like to offer you mine since it’s in a very good condition and fits your requirements. My old television is just 3 years old and has never got any complaint. It’s a 32-inch Sony LCD screen with blue-tooth and HDMI connectivity. It is under the company' s warranty that covers 10 years after purchase. All the bills are a warranty card is with us. The TV has a good sound quality and also has a USB port. If you are still searching for one and my television fits your requirements, you can see it anytime by next weekend. The price can be discussed once you like it. waiting for your reply. Bhawna Sharma
Dear
Possible spelling mistake found.
Baljeet
,

I hope you and your family are in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health and spirit. It’s been a long time since we met. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
I’d write to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I am selling my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
television as I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a new Samsung(
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
52 inches
, full HD)
Possible spelling mistake found.
tv
recently. As I remember the last time we met, you were looking for an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
TV online. I would like to offer you mine since it’s in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition and fits your requirements.

My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
television is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
3 years
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
old
and has never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
any complaint. It’s a 32-inch Sony LCD screen with blue-tooth and HDMI connectivity. It is under the
Possible spelling mistake found.
company&
#039; s warranty that covers 10 years after
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
. All the bills are a warranty card is with us. The TV has a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
sound quality and
also
has a USB port.

If you are
still
searching for one and my television fits your requirements, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
it anytime by
next
weekend. The price can
be discussed
once you like it.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
waiting
for your reply.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Bhawna
Sharma
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain: 1. Why you are selling the television2. Describe the television3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it v. 7

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain: 1. Why you are selling the television2. Describe the television3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it v.7