Dear Tom,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m just writing to say I’m very happy that you’d want to come to visit Ho Chi Minh City next year.
You know, every year we celebrate Tet holiday in February and let me tell you, it’s extremely fun. So, it’ll be best if you visit the city during this time of year. It’d be even better if you’d come and enjoy the first 2 weeks of this month because the weather is always refreshing at the start of spring.
If you’re looking for a place to stay, I suggest The Grand Hotel in district 1. It’s located right in the center of the city so it’s very convenient to go around and explore downtown. What’s more, it’s rated 5 stars and recommended by many locals and travelers on Facebook.
That said, I’d be very happy if you’d want to stay at my home in district Tan Binh. I have 2 spare bedrooms for you and your family to stay in. We’ll also have a chance to hang out at night so I can show you around my friendly and peaceful neighborhood.
I look forward to hearing from you.
All the best,
Truong
Dear Tom,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m  
just
 writing to say I’m  
very
 happy that you’d want to  
come
 to visit Ho Chi Minh City  
next
 year.
You know, every year we celebrate Tet holiday in February and  
let
 me  
tell
 you, it’s  
extremely
 fun.  
So
, it’ll be best if you visit the city during this time of year. It’d be even better if you’d  
come
 and enjoy the  
first
 2 weeks of this month  
because
 the weather is always refreshing at the  
start
 of spring.
If you’re looking for a place to stay, I suggest The Grand Hotel in district 1. It’s located right in the center of the city  
so
 it’s  
very
 convenient to go around and explore downtown. What’s more, it’s rated 5 stars and recommended by  
many
 locals and travelers on Facebook.
That said, I’d be  
very
 happy if you’d want to stay at my home in district Tan  
Binh
. I have 2 spare bedrooms for you and your family to stay in. We’ll  
also
 have a chance to hang out at night  
so
 I can  
show
 you around my friendly and peaceful neighborhood.
I look forward to hearing from you.
All the best, 
Truong
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