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Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown In your letter say When is the best time to visit Recommend someplace to stay Invite her him to your house v.1

Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown In your letter say When is the best time to visit Recommend someplace to stay Invite her him to your house v. 1
Dear Tom, I hope you’re doing well. I’m just writing to say I’m very happy that you’d want to come to visit Ho Chi Minh City next year. You know, every year we celebrate Tet holiday in February and let me tell you, it’s extremely fun. So, it’ll be best if you visit the city during this time of year. It’d be even better if you’d come and enjoy the first 2 weeks of this month because the weather is always refreshing at the start of spring. If you’re looking for a place to stay, I suggest The Grand Hotel in district 1. It’s located right in the center of the city so it’s very convenient to go around and explore downtown. What’s more, it’s rated 5 stars and recommended by many locals and travelers on Facebook. That said, I’d be very happy if you’d want to stay at my home in district Tan Binh. I have 2 spare bedrooms for you and your family to stay in. We’ll also have a chance to hang out at night so I can show you around my friendly and peaceful neighborhood. I look forward to hearing from you. All the best, Truong
Dear Tom,

I hope you’re doing well. I’m
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, it’ll be best if you visit the city during this time of year. It’d be even better if you’d
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come
and enjoy the
first
2 weeks of this month
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because
the weather is always refreshing at the
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start
of spring.

If you’re looking for a place to stay, I suggest The Grand Hotel in district 1. It’s located right in the center of the city
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so
it’s
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very
convenient to go around and explore downtown. What’s more, it’s rated 5 stars and recommended by
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many
locals and travelers on Facebook.

That said, I’d be
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very
happy if you’d want to stay at my home in district Tan
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Binh
. I have 2 spare bedrooms for you and your family to stay in. We’ll
also
have a chance to hang out at night
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I can
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show
you around my friendly and peaceful neighborhood.

I look forward to hearing from you.

All the best,

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Truong
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown In your letter say When is the best time to visit Recommend someplace to stay Invite her him to your house v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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