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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to a prize for amateur writers at Thanh Nien newspaper. I received a call from the newspaper’s headquarter informing that I won the first prize for the contest held to discover new writers last month. M v.1

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to a prize for amateur writers at Thanh Nien newspaper. I received a call from the newspaper’s headquarter informing that I won the first prize for the contest held to discover new writers last month. M v. 1
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to a prize for amateur writers at Thanh Nien newspaper. I received a call from the newspaper’s headquarter last month informing that I won the first prize for the writing contest. my submission was chosen and posted in the science section of the volume published on May 25th. my prize was 2 million Vietnam dongs along with a contract to work at your newspaper as a part-time writer. it was also mentioned that I would be given a 3-month training course at Literature and Society university with professional writers from Singapore. As for the money, it was supposed to be transferred to my bank account 2 weeks ago. As I have not received any further information to claim my prize so far, I would be grateful if you could take a look at this situation. I really need this money to pay my bills because I am still a college student and I am living in a budget. Therefore, if you could, please transfer this money to my bank account soon. I can still wait for the contract and the training course. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Truong Nguyen
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to a
prize
for amateur writers at Thanh
Nien
newspaper.

I received a call from the newspaper’s
headquarter
last month informing that I won the
first
prize
for the writing contest.
my
submission
was chosen
and posted in the science section of the volume published on May 25th.

my
prize
was 2 million Vietnam dongs along with a contract to work at your newspaper as a part-time writer.
it
was
also
mentioned that I would be
given
a 3-month training course at Literature and Society university with professional writers from Singapore. As for the money, it
was supposed
to
be transferred
to my bank account 2 weeks ago.

As I have not received any
further
information to claim my
prize
so
far, I would be grateful if you could take a look at this situation. I
really
need this money to pay my bills
because
I am
still
a college
student and
I am living in a budget.
Therefore
, if you could,
please
transfer this money to my bank account
soon
. I can
still
wait for the contract and the training course.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Truong
Nguyen
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to a prize for amateur writers at Thanh Nien newspaper. I received a call from the newspaper’s headquarter informing that I won the first prize for the contest held to discover new writers last month. M v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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