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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter a Invite him her to a public event in your country b Describe the public event c Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he she will visit v.2

Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter a Invite him her to a public event in your country b Describe the public event c Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he she will visit v. 2
Hi Uloma, How are you? I hope this letter meets you well. Our new yam festival is coming up on the 25th September and I' m inviting you to the ceremony. This is an opportunity to experience my culture like you have always wanted. The new yam festival is an annual event that marks the beginning of the harvesting period in my country. On the first day of the celebration, every family harvests the biggest yam tuber in their farm. This yam is cooked by the mother of the house. The head of the family then prays over it, blesses every member of his family and the food is shared to everybody, including their visitors. Over the next three days, different music groups parade on the streets, singing and dancing. It is such a glamorous event. I am also planning other activities for you during this period. Before the end of the event, we shall go to the lake where we will take a boat ride. You will also see other visitors from different countries. Oguta lake is one of the most popular places for tourists who come to Nigeria and do not be surprised if we meet people from your country there. Also I will take you to the Oka museum that you have always talked about. I bet you, you will relish every moment in my town. I really hope you will be able to make it. See you soon. All the best, Chinedu.
Hi
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Uloma
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How are you? I hope this letter meets you well. Our new yam festival is coming up on the 25th September and
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#039; m inviting you to the ceremony. This is an opportunity to experience my culture like you have always wanted.

The new yam festival is an annual
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event
that marks the beginning of the harvesting period in my country. On the
first
day of the celebration, every family harvests the biggest yam tuber in their farm. This yam
is cooked
by the mother of the
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house
. The head of the family then prays over it, blesses every member of his family and the food
is shared
to everybody, including their visitors. Over the
next
three days,
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different
music groups parade on the streets, singing and dancing. It is such a glamorous
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event
.

I am
also
planning other activities for you during this period.
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Before
the
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end
of the
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event
, we shall go to the lake where we will take a boat ride. You will
also
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see
other visitors from
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different
countries.
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Oguta
lake is one of the most popular places for tourists who
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come
to Nigeria and do not
be surprised
if we
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meet
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people
from your country there.
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Also
I will take you to the
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Oka
museum that you have always talked about. I bet you, you will relish every moment in my town.

I
really
hope you will be able to
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make
it.
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See
you
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soon
.

All the best,

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Chinedu
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5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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Nelson Mandela

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter a Invite him her to a public event in your country b Describe the public event c Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he she will visit v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
246 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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