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Write a letter to your friend inviting on family party In the letter you should what the activity is what you planed why it is important that your friend should come v.2

Write a letter to your friend inviting on family party In the letter you should what the activity is what you planed why it is important that your friend should come v. 2
Dear Sally, Hi how are you doing there in Amsterdam? I am would like to invite you to a birthday party of my father this coming 27th of March 2019 This event will take place in our family house in Manila, Philippines. We prepared a lot activities especially sight seeing the mountains, visiting the museums and also go to the beach and enjoy the sun. It is important that you should come to the party since that we have considered you as a part of our family. I think we should also continue the love that we missed in the few years that have past. I really missed you a lot and my family misses you so much. If you made up your mind and agree to come to the party. Just give me a call or email me at bill@12345mail. com. Okay, I look forward seeing you. Best wishes, Bill
Dear Sally,

Hi how are you doing there in Amsterdam? I am would like to invite you to a birthday party of my father this coming 27th of March 2019

This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
will take place in our family
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house
in Manila, Philippines. We prepared
If you mean a great quantity, use "a lot of activities"?
a lot activities
especially
sight seeing the mountains, visiting the museums and
also
go to the beach and enjoy the sun.

It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
that you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the party since that we have considered you as a part of our family. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
we should
also
continue the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
that we missed in the few years that have past. I
really
missed you a lot and my family misses you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much.

If you made up your mind and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the party.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
give me a call or email me at bill@12345mail.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
.

Okay, I look forward seeing you.

Best wishes,

Bill
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting on family party In the letter you should what the activity is what you planed why it is important that your friend should come v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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