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Write a Letter to your friend who also happens to live in that countrytell him/her why you chose this countrydescribe your new place of residencepropose a meeting with your friendbegin your letter with dear v.2

Write a Letter to your friend who also happens to live in that countrytell him/her why you chose this countrydescribe your new place of residencepropose a meeting with your friendbegin your letter with dear v. 2
Dear Grace, Hi, how are you doing there? I hope you are doing fine. i did not know that you have already arrived here at Winnipeg last March. Well this province here in Canada is very cold but there a lot of opportunities in my career as well as being a multicultural province. Also the people here are jolly and they have equal treatment when it comes to job opportunities. The place I am living right now is quite big. It has a garden upfront, 2 bedrooms, and a garage. The neighborhood which, I am currently living in is quite fun because most of the citizen here are open minded. It is winter right now so I am shoveling off the snow on our pathway 6 times a day so that we can walk through it going to our job. Living here in Winnipeg is not boring as some people said, you can visit the museum nearby. If it is OK with you grace, would like to go out with me? and visit some interesting areas here in the city center. You can reach me via text or give me a call at my number 09361234567 or email me at bill123@mail. com. So that you can tell me when would you be available. I look forward seeing you. Best Wishes, Bill
Dear Grace,

Hi, how are you doing there? I hope you are doing fine.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
did not know that you have already arrived here at Winnipeg last March.

Well this province here in Canada is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there
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a lot of
opportunities in my career
as well
as being a multicultural province.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
here are
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
jolly and
they have equal treatment when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to job opportunities.

The place I am living right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
is quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
. It has a garden upfront, 2 bedrooms, and a garage. The neighborhood which, I am
currently
living in is quite fun
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
most of the citizen here are
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
open minded
. It is winter right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I am shoveling off the snow on our pathway 6 times a day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we can walk through it going to our job. Living here in Winnipeg is not boring as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
said, you can visit the museum nearby.

If it is OK with you grace, would like to go out with me?
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
and
visit
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
interesting areas here in the city center.

You can reach me via text or give me a call at my number 09361234567 or email me at bill123@mail.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me when would you be available.

I look forward seeing you.

Best Wishes,

Bill
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
One language sets you in a corridor for life. Two languages open every door along the way.
Frank Smith

IELTS letter Write a Letter to your friend who also happens to live in that countrytell him/her why you chose this countrydescribe your new place of residencepropose a meeting with your friendbegin your letter with dear v. 2

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
220 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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