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Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. v.4

Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. v. 4
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to request for the necessary information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate programme that is offered at your university. For your kind information, I am planning to pursue the course in the next term. As far as my previous educational qualifications are concerned, I have finished my higher school certification about 8 years ago, after completing 12 years of schooling, in India with a GPA of 3. 75. Later on, I also finished my Bachelor degree in science before starting my career as a Nutrition Expert at a leading snack manufacturing company in my country. By the way, my major was science, and I studied physics, mathematics, chemistry, zoology and English among other subjects. Currently, I am planning to get my admission to a renowned Engineering university in Australian in order to pursue a post-graduate education because I am convinced that this tertiary preparation programme would help me further my career. Therefore, I would really appreciate it if you please send me all the necessary information regarding the admission procedure, course duration and tuition fees at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Mousumi Ahona
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to request for the necessary information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate
programme
that
is offered
at your university. For your kind information, I am planning to pursue the course in the
next
term.

As far as my previous educational qualifications
are concerned
, I have finished my higher school certification about 8 years ago, after completing 12 years of schooling, in India with a GPA of 3. 75. Later on, I
also
finished my Bachelor degree in science
before
starting my career as a Nutrition Expert at a leading snack manufacturing
company
in my country. By the way, my major was science, and I studied physics, mathematics, chemistry, zoology and English among other subjects.

Currently
, I am planning to
get
my admission to a renowned Engineering university in Australian in order to pursue a post-graduate education
because
I
am convinced
that this tertiary preparation
programme
would
help
me
further
my career.
Therefore
, I would
really
appreciate it if you
please
send
me all the necessary information regarding the admission procedure, course duration and tuition fees at your earliest convenience.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mousumi
Ahona
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. v. 4

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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