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Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. v.2

Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request some information regarding your Tertiary Preparation Certificate programme which I am planning to pursue this term. I am hoping you would provide the necessary details so that I can intake the course. Regarding my education qualification, I have finished my high school diploma from the Montessori Elementary School in Baguio, the Philippines, three years ago and my major was science. I received 76% marks in my school final exam. Now I want to get admitted to a reputed university for higher studies in the UK and for that I want to enrol in this course. I am convinced that the tertiary preparation course at your institution would greatly help me in my university education. For that, I need to know the course duration, tuition fee and admission procedure for the Tertiary Preparation Certificate programme. I am planning to take the architectural study in a reputed UK university and would really appreciate if you inform me of the courses I should take. Finally, do inform me of the document checklist for getting admission. Thank you in advance. I look forward to your kind response regarding my concerns. Yours faithfully, Lyn Olivar
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request
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some
information regarding your Tertiary Preparation Certificate
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programme
which I am planning to pursue this term. I am hoping you would provide the necessary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can intake the course.

Regarding my education qualification, I have finished my high school diploma from the Montessori Elementary School in Baguio, the Philippines, three years ago and my major was science. I received 76% marks in my school final exam.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
admitted to a reputed university for higher studies in the UK and for that I want to enrol in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I
am convinced
that the tertiary preparation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
at your institution would
greatly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in my university education.

For that, I need to know the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
duration, tuition fee and admission procedure for the Tertiary Preparation Certificate
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
. I am planning to take the architectural study in a reputed UK university and would
really
appreciate if you inform me of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
I should take.
Finally
, do inform me of the document checklist for getting admission.

Thank you in advance. I look forward to your kind response regarding my concerns.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Lyn
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Olivar
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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