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Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement v.2

Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to put forward my fair viewpoint regarding your magazine that I had recently bought last week. As I am fond to read articles that provide me updated information about the happing across the globe; therefore, I have been told by one of my friends to buy this publication as it covers a wide range of stories globally. I must say that the contents of your magazine are well written as it gives the information starting from Europe, North America, and African regions. However, I am sorry to say that the pattern of the publication is not in the sequence as it needs to be region wise rather than mingling in bits and pieces so, the reader like me won’t get confused. Moreover, I would suggest you please include children' s stories from the Asian region as most of the kids in South Asia are struggling to find an appropriate publication to ready stories. Besides, I am of the view that this will enlarge your audience, and profit subsequently. I hope you will consider my option before your next publication. Best regards,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to put forward my
fair
viewpoint regarding your magazine that I had recently
bought
last week.

As I am fond to read articles that provide me updated information about the
happing
across the globe;
therefore
, I have been
told
by one of my friends to
buy
this publication as it covers a wide range of stories globally. I
must
say that the contents of your magazine are well written as it gives the information starting from Europe, North America, and African regions.
However
, I am sorry to say that the pattern of the publication is not in the sequence as it needs to be region wise
rather
than mingling in bits and pieces
so
, the reader like me won’t
get
confused.

Moreover
, I would suggest you
please
include
children&
#039; s stories from the Asian region as most of the kids in South Asia are struggling to find an appropriate publication to ready stories.
Besides
, I am of the view that this will enlarge your audience, and profit
subsequently
.

I hope you will consider my option
before
your
next
publication.

Best regards,
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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