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Write a letter to a friend inviting him to go on vacation with you Include Why you want to go on holiday Where you want to go Why you want him to come with you v.2

Write a letter to a friend inviting him to go on vacation with you Include Why you want to go on holiday Where you want to go Why you want him to come with you v. 2
Dear Alex, I hope you are doing fine today. I am writing this letter to invite you for a holiday trip to Canada next week. As you are aware that I have been extensively working for the past six months on a new proposal, and I am happy to let you know that we got the project due to our competitive rates in the market. Therefore, I am free now for a couple of weeks and would like to spend some time to rewind the stress from a daily routine. I plan to visit Manitoba, Canada as I am about to submit my application for the provincial nomination program so, this trip would help me to witness the indigenous culture, medical and educational facilities out there. Also, I got to know that there are a plethora of worth seeing places to visit for the new immigrants. I would you to join me for the visit as you had spent three years in Manitoba province for a master' s degree. Therefore, I could visit maximum places, and find out the appropriate community to live with a family with your help subsequently, you could meet up with your friends in the province after a long time. I look forward to hearing from you to make a plan and book flight tickets accordingly. Your friend.
Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing fine
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today
.

I am writing this letter to invite you for a holiday trip to Canada
next
week.

As you are aware that I have been
extensively
working for the past six months on a new proposal, and I am happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the project due to our competitive rates in the market.
Therefore
, I am free
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
for a couple of weeks and would like to spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time to rewind the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
from a daily routine. I plan to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
Manitoba, Canada as I am about to submit my application for the provincial nomination program
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, this trip would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to witness the indigenous culture, medical and educational facilities out there.
Also
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
to know that there are a plethora of worth seeing places to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
for the new immigrants.

I would you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
me for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
as you had spent three years in Manitoba province for a
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master&
#039; s degree.
Therefore
, I could
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
maximum places, and find out the appropriate community to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with a family with your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
subsequently
, you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
up with your friends in the province after a long time.

I look forward to hearing from you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a plan and book flight tickets
accordingly
.

Your friend.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend inviting him to go on vacation with you Include Why you want to go on holiday Where you want to go Why you want him to come with you v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
222 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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