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Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter Introduce yourself.  Complain about the delay Explain the problems that is caused you Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation. v.2

Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter Introduce yourself.  Complain about the delay Explain the problems that is caused you Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation. v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, my name is Neg Shir who recently came back from a journey to Australia. While I have found all the facilities of your airline company satisfactory, Thus far, I wish to lodge a complain about the return flight number 98324 on 21st July which had delayed for 1 day. this demeanor caused considerable inconvenience, not a mere to myself but also to my employers, as I was due to commence work again the following day. Actually it almost costs my job. Your company brochure, which motivated me to choose this airline, indicated any delay on flights would be recompense. Given this fact that this foul-up occurred without any customers announcement was entirely the fault of your airline, I feel that a compensation in the form of a complimentary ticket of the same distance would be warranted. I can be contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated. Your faithfully, Neg Shir
Dear Sir or Madam,

my name is Neg
Shir
who recently came back from a journey to Australia. While I have found all the facilities of your airline
company
satisfactory,
Thus
far, I wish to lodge a
complain
about the return flight number 98324 on 21st July which had delayed for 1 day.
this
demeanor caused considerable inconvenience, not a mere to myself
but
also
to my employers, as I was due to commence work again the following day. Actually it almost costs my job. Your
company
brochure, which motivated me to choose this airline, indicated any delay on flights would be recompense.
Given
this fact that this foul-up occurred without any
customers
announcement was
entirely
the fault of your airline, I feel that a compensation in the form of a complimentary ticket of the same distance would
be warranted
. I can
be contacted
at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is
greatly
appreciated.

Your
faithfully
,

Neg
Shir
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter Introduce yourself.  Complain about the delay Explain the problems that is caused you Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation. v. 2

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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