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Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: •include some information about the film•explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film•inform other arran v.2

Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: •include some information about the film•explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film•inform other arran v. 2
Dear Sam, I hope this letter finds you in best of health. Since you are here in Pakistan from past two months and I observed that you are fond of traveling and food. I would like to invite you at my place to watch a movie which is clearly related to your interest and contains information about beautiful places of theis country. To tell you more about this film, it is one of the best movies based on some very interesting information regarding cultures, places and food from almost every nook and corner of Pakistan. Not only this, I have arranged a proper multi-media projector along with sound system. As this movie contains some really breathtaking scenes that can best enjoyed on bigger screen with proper sound. At the end to cater your hunger, snacks and beverages will also be available followed by a great BBQ dinner. Hope you will accept this humble invitation and will grace my place by visiting on this weekend at sharp 7: 00 PM. Anxiously waiting to see you at my place. Yours Truly, John
Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you in best of health. Since you are here in Pakistan from past two months and I observed that you are fond of traveling and food. I would like to invite you at my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
a movie which is
clearly
related to your interest and contains information about
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
of
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theis
country.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you more about this film, it is one of the best movies based on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interesting information regarding cultures,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
and food from almost every nook and corner of Pakistan. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
this, I have arranged a proper multi-media projector along with sound system.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
this movie contains
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
really
breathtaking scenes that can best enjoyed on bigger screen with proper sound. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
to cater your hunger, snacks and beverages will
also
be available followed by a great BBQ dinner. Hope you will accept this humble invitation and will grace my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
by visiting on this weekend at sharp 7: 00 PM.

Anxiously
waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you at my place.

Yours
Truly
,

John
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
A foreign language is like a frail, delicate muscle. If you do not use it, it weakens.
Jhumpa Lahiri

IELTS letter Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: •include some information about the film•explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film•inform other arran v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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