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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writingExpress your appreciationA v.4

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writingExpress your appreciationA v. 4
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am Jack, whom you saved from a fatal accident 2 weeks earlier. My car broke down in the middle of road and a truck hit my car from front. I lost conscious right away and was taken to the hospital by you. My right shoulder was badly fractured. I was admitted in hospital for a week' s time and i cannot thank you enough for the way you have taken care of me during that time. Despite of not knowing my name even you took care of me like your own brother. I cannot express my gratitude through words. You have shown tremendous act of humanity that i am extremely grateful for. My belief has gotten firm that world is still full of excellent human beings like you. I would not be able to repay you for the kind act you did, but i would like to extend our relationship further. I would be really glad if you and your family could join us for dinner coming Saturday. My family is very eager to see my life savior. I look forward to your positive response and will be glad to be your host. Looking to hear from you soon. Your Sincerely, Jack
Dear Sam,

Hope this letter finds you in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health. I am Jack, whom you saved from a fatal accident 2 weeks earlier. My car broke down in the middle of road and a truck hit my car from front. I lost conscious right away and
was taken
to the hospital by you. My right shoulder was
badly
fractured. I
was admitted
in hospital for a
Possible spelling mistake found.
week&
#039; s time and
Did you mean "I"?
i
cannot thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
for the way you have taken care of me during that time.
Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
Despite of
not knowing my name even you took care of me like your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
brother. I cannot express my gratitude through words. You have shown tremendous act of humanity that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
extremely
grateful for. My belief has gotten firm that world is
still
full of excellent human beings like you.

I would not be able to repay you for the kind act you did,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like to extend our relationship
further
. I would be
really
glad if you and your family could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
us for dinner coming Saturday. My family is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
eager to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
my life savior. I look forward to your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response and will be glad to be your host.

Looking to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
Sincerely
,

Jack
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writingExpress your appreciationA v. 4

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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