Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am Jack, whom you saved from a fatal accident 2 weeks earlier. My car broke down in the middle of road and a truck hit my car from front. I lost conscious right away and was taken to the hospital by you. My right shoulder was badly fractured. I was admitted in hospital for a week' s time and i cannot thank you enough for the way you have taken care of me during that time. Despite of not knowing my name even you took care of me like your own brother. I cannot express my gratitude through words. You have shown tremendous act of humanity that i am extremely grateful for. My belief has gotten firm that world is still full of excellent human beings like you.
I would not be able to repay you for the kind act you did, but i would like to extend our relationship further. I would be really glad if you and your family could join us for dinner coming Saturday. My family is very eager to see my life savior. I look forward to your positive response and will be glad to be your host.
Looking to hear from you soon.
Your Sincerely,
Jack
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in
good
health. I am Jack, whom you saved from a fatal accident 2 weeks earlier. My car broke down in the middle of road and a truck hit my car from front. I lost conscious right away and
was taken
to the hospital by you. My right shoulder was
badly
fractured. I
was admitted
in hospital for a
week&
#039; s time and
i
cannot thank you
enough
for the way you have taken care of me during that time.
Despite of
not knowing my name even you took care of me like your
own
brother. I cannot express my gratitude through words. You have shown tremendous act of humanity that
i
am
extremely
grateful for. My belief has gotten firm that world is
still
full of excellent human beings like you.
I would not be able to repay you for the kind act you did,
but
i
would like to extend our relationship
further
. I would be
really
glad if you and your family could
join
us for dinner coming Saturday. My family is
very
eager to
see
my life savior. I look forward to your
positive
response and will be glad to be your host.
Looking to hear from you
soon
.
Your
Sincerely
,
Jack
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