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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friendfrom an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and- invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s importan v.2

There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friendfrom an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and- invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s importan v. 2
Dear Kate, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to celebrate Nauryz in Kazakhstan. Last year when I worked in Australia, you wanted to visit me and believe me, it is the best time to come to Kazakhstan. Nauryz marks the beginning of the new year and is celebrated several days starting from 21st of March, the day of the spring equinox. During Nauryz celebrations, past offences are forgiven and forgotten and everyone makes a wish to leave all badness and bring renewal in the new year. City squares get full of yurts (traditional nomadic houses) and many performances take place. Here one can learn about culture and lifestyle of the nomads, listen to Kazakh songs and plays of musical instruments, taste traditional meals like beshparmak, baursak, kuyurdak and other meals made from milk. Nauryz kozhe is the main dish served during the holiday. Traditionally, it contains seven ingredients that symbolize seven values, such as joy, success, wealth, health, intelligence, agility and security. I would be honoured to have you as my guest during your entire stay here. I assure you it’ll be a memorable holiday for you. Hope to see you soon! Yours lovingly, Balzhan
Dear Kate,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to celebrate
Nauryz
in Kazakhstan. Last year when I worked in Australia, you wanted to visit me and believe me, it is the best time to
come
to Kazakhstan.

Nauryz
marks the beginning of the new year and
is celebrated
several days starting from 21st of March, the day of the spring equinox. During
Nauryz
celebrations, past
offences
are forgiven
and forgotten and everyone
makes
a wish to
leave
all badness and bring renewal in the new year. City squares
get
full of yurts (traditional nomadic
houses
) and
many
performances take place. Here one can learn about culture and lifestyle of the nomads, listen to Kazakh songs and plays of musical instruments, taste traditional meals like
beshparmak
,
baursak
,
kuyurdak
and other meals made from milk.
Nauryz
kozhe
is the main dish served during the holiday.
Traditionally
, it contains seven ingredients that symbolize seven values, such as joy, success, wealth, health, intelligence, agility and security.

I would be
honoured
to have you as my guest during your entire stay here. I assure you it’ll be a memorable holiday for you.

Hope to
see
you
soon
!

Yours
lovingly
,

Balzhan
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS letter There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friendfrom an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and- invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s importan v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
209 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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