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Write a letter to a friend you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. apologise for damaging the production. Explain what happened. . Say how are you doing to fix the issue v.2

Write a letter to a friend you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. apologise for damaging the production. Explain what happened. . Say how are you doing to fix the issue v. 2
Hello! How are you? I am fine. I hope you are also in good health. I am writing this started to apologise my mistake. Last month, I was going in Chandigarh in sector 10 market for shopping. Suddenly I look there it is again bookshop. So I was told for purchase the book for you. Because I know that you that you are come in next month in my home. It is a good book it' s get it to politics and you are also like this book then I came back to home and sit in car and on the way for house that time I thought for reading books suddenly my sister was saying for drinking water then I open the bottle of water and water thrown into bottle and go into a book and a book was damage, I' ll picture books are Tami that you are come in next month in my home. It is a good book it' s get it to politics and you are also like this book then I came back to home and sit in car and on the way for house that time I thought for reading books suddenly my sister was saying for drinking water then I open the bottle of water and water thrown into bottle and go into a book and a book was damaged, all pages of books damage with water and I give many adverts for repair the book pages and all I also give hate to book pages but they book car damage then I was very sad so I am sorry to you if I go to the shop again I definitely purchase book again. Yours truly Aman
Hello! How are you? I am fine. I hope you are
also
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
my mistake.

Last month, I was going in Chandigarh in sector 10 market for shopping.
Suddenly
I look there it is again bookshop.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
for you.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
I know
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "that you".
that you that you
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
in
next
month in my home. It is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
Possible spelling mistake found.
it&
#039; s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it to politics and you are
also
like this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
then I came back to home and sit in car and on the way for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
that time I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
for reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
suddenly
my sister was saying for drinking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
then I open the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottle
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
thrown into
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottle
and go into a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
was damage,
Possible spelling mistake found.
I&
#039; ll picture
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are Tami that you are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
in
next
month in my home. It is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
Possible spelling mistake found.
it&
#039; s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it to politics and you are
also
like this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
then I came back to home and sit in car and on the way for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
that time I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
for reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
suddenly
my sister was saying for drinking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
then I open the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottle
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
thrown into
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bottle
and go into a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
was damaged
, all pages of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
damage with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
and I give
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
adverts for repair the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
pages and all I
also
give hate to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
pages
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
car damage then I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
sad
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I am sorry to you if I go to the shop again I definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
again.

Yours
truly


Possible spelling mistake found.
Aman
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. apologise for damaging the production. Explain what happened. . Say how are you doing to fix the issue v. 2

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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