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Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week. 1) Describe where he will stay. 2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. v.2

Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week. 1) Describe where he will stay. 2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. v. 2
Dear Leena, Thanks a million for your letter. I can not tell you how much I am delighted to hear about your visit to India next week. Recently, I got shifted to Bangalore due to a new job in the company. Here, I have bought a new flat near to the office. It is in a Vijaya Bank Layout, Bangalore. When you are arriving in the city, you will have to stay with me here. My house is next to the Forum mall, where we can explore new releases and do lots of shopping. Isn' t it excited, is it? As I informed you earlier, Bangalore' s weather is better than the other cities. However, it turns a bit colder in October and November months. Therefore, I would recommend you to carry light warm clothes when you visit here. Since it is your first time in Bangalore, I' ll show you some famous tourist places here. There, we can explore multiple options ranging from river rafting, mountain trekking, bungee jumping to wild-life centuries. I am impatiently waiting for your arrival! Take care and see you soon. Anika
Dear
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Leena
,

Thanks a million for your letter. I can not
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tell
you how much I
am delighted
to hear about your visit to India
next
week.

Recently, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
shifted to Bangalore due to a new job in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. Here, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a new flat near to the office. It is in a
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Vijaya
Bank Layout, Bangalore. When you are arriving in the city, you will
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have to
stay with me here. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is
next
to the Forum mall, where we can explore new releases and do lots of shopping.
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Isn&
#039; t it excited, is it?

As I informed you earlier,
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Bangalore&
#039; s weather is better than the other cities.
However
, it turns a bit colder in October and November months.
Therefore
, I would recommend you to carry light warm clothes when you visit here.

Since it is your
first
time in Bangalore,
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I&
#039; ll
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show
you
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some
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famous
tourist places here. There, we can explore multiple options ranging from river rafting, mountain trekking, bungee jumping to wild-life centuries.

I am
impatiently
waiting for your arrival!

Take care and
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see
you
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soon
.

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Anika
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week. 1) Describe where he will stay. 2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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