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The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order to hold the training. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your l v.2

The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order to hold the training. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your l v. 2
Dear sir, I am inscribing this epistle to draw your attention about the bi-monthly training of our company employees regarding good manufacturing practices at your designated conference hall. This training held on next Saturday and whole agenda is about educating staff about the importance of wearing personal protective equipment’s such as gloves, mask, beard nets, gowns respectively. However, work related scenarios represented by certain workers to educate them about importance of this concept at their workplace. Further, this session needs good seating arrangements for approximately 100 people, a large center table and a projector screen. I bring my personal laptop for the presentation. There must be tea and snacks in the afternoon for the staff as they became hungry by that time. Apart from this, I particularly insist on providing tea/ coffee containers and few dim lights at the stage as well as complete silence at the center in order to conduct the whole training successfully. Moreover, we need a registration chamber at the entrance to mark attendance of each staff member. I hope your center provide the related facilities as I mentioned above. I am interested in hearing the reply within 1-2 business days. Yours sincerely, abc
Dear sir,

I am inscribing this epistle to draw your attention about the bi-monthly training of our
company
employees regarding
good
manufacturing practices at your designated conference hall.

This training held on
next
Saturday and whole agenda is about educating staff about the importance of wearing personal protective equipment’s such as gloves, mask, beard nets, gowns
respectively
.
However
, work related scenarios represented by certain workers to educate them about importance of this concept at their workplace.

Further
, this session needs
good
seating arrangements for approximately 100
people
, a large center table and a projector screen. I bring my personal laptop for the presentation. There
must
be tea and snacks in the afternoon for the staff as they became hungry by that time. Apart from this, I
particularly
insist on providing tea/ coffee containers and few dim lights at the stage
as well
as complete silence at the center in order to conduct the whole training
successfully
.
Moreover
, we need a registration chamber at the entrance to mark attendance of each staff member.

I hope your center provide the related facilities as I mentioned above. I
am interested
in hearing the reply within 1-2 business days.

Yours
sincerely
,

abc
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order to hold the training. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your l v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
197 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resources: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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