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Write a letter to a friend of yours whom you have not met for a long time. In your letter, describe how you have been and describe a few changes in your life during that time. Also invite him or her to join you soon. v.2

Write a letter to a friend of yours whom you have not met for a long time. In your letter, describe how you have been and describe a few changes in your life during that time. Also invite him or her to join you soon. v. 2
Dear Thu, I am sorry I haven' t written for a long time. How are you? Are Su and Ben fine? My family is still good and we remember your family so much. I am writing to invite you to attend a party, which will be celebrated at six o' clock on September 29th 2019, to certificate my new house. I didn' t live in a flat. After 6 year with a hard working I have bought a small house with two bed room at Go Vap District, near my family house. I also changed my job. I employed as a skin-care staff by Nu Spa and Clinic. As I told you before, this is my passion so I really feel exciting when I do that work. In addition, this job give me a high salary and more time to take care my children. I have more things to tell you about so I hope you can participate with me. My address is 488 Pham Van Chieu Ward 6, Go Vap District. See you soon Calla Balls
Dear Thu,

I am sorry I
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haven&
#039; t written for a long time. How are you?
The singular proper name Su must be used with "is".
Are
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Su
and Ben fine? My family is
still
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
good and
we remember your family
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so
much.

I am writing to invite you to attend a party, which will
be celebrated
at six
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o&
#039; clock on September 29th 2019, to certificate my new
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house
. I
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didn&
#039; t
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live
in a flat. After 6 year with a
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
hard working
I have
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bought
a
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small
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house
with two
This word is normally spelled as one.
bed room
at Go
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Vap
District, near my family
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house
. I
also
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changed
my job. I employed as a skin-care staff by Nu Spa and Clinic. As I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
you
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before
, this is my passion
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so
I
really
feel exciting when I do that work.
In addition
, this job give me a high salary and more time to take care my children.

I have more things to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about
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so
I hope you can participate with me. My address is 488
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Pham
Van
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Chieu
Ward 6, Go
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Vap
District.

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See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon


Calla Balls
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend of yours whom you have not met for a long time. In your letter, describe how you have been and describe a few changes in your life during that time. Also invite him or her to join you soon. v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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