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Essay topics: you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to you boss. in your lettertell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job v.2

Essay topics: you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to you boss. in your lettertell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job v. 2
Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing this letter to submit my resignation as I have decided to embark on a new journey of my career. I will start working with another organisation starting next month. I have decided to quit mainly because I want to make a shift in my career. I have been working with manufacturing department since last 4 years and I believe I should start working with Design department to meet my career aspirations of becoming Director of Automotive Company. I would be forever grateful to have you my mentor during all this time and I give you all the credit of my professional achievements. Your guidance in understanding the basics of automotive manufacturing processes and the use of Quality control tools will be forever remembered throughout my career. I honestly feel very sad that I won’t be working under your supervision and with this great team in coming days. As we have worked for a significant amount of time, I would like to sincerely request you for the reference letter. I believe your recommendation letter will help others to recognise my skills and character. Thank you again for this wonderful opportunity. It was pleasure working with you. Yours sincerely, Nilesh Shah
Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am writing this letter to submit my resignation as I have decided to embark on a new journey of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
. I will
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start
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working
with another
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
starting
next
month.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have decided to quit
mainly
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because
I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a shift in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
with manufacturing department since last 4 years and I believe I should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
with Design department to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
aspirations of becoming Director of Automotive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Company
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be forever grateful to have you my mentor during all this time and I give you all the credit of my professional achievements. Your guidance in understanding the basics of automotive manufacturing processes and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of Quality control tools will be forever remembered throughout my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
career
. I
honestly
feel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
sad that I won’t be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
under your supervision and with this great team in coming days.

As we have worked for a significant amount of time, I would like to
sincerely
request you for the reference letter. I believe your recommendation letter will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
others to
Possible spelling mistake. 'recognise' is British English.
recognise
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and character.

Thank you again for this wonderful opportunity. It was pleasure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
with you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Nilesh Shah
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter Essay topics: you have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field. write a letter of resignation to you boss. in your lettertell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leavingexplain what you have learnt from your current job v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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