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You saw a person that you knew in a newspaper which you have no contact for a very long time. Write to the editor and in your letter include: Tell how you knew that personWhat do you want to tell that personTell how the editor can help you contact that per v.2

You saw a person that you knew in a newspaper which you have no contact for a very long time. Write to the editor and in your letter include: Tell how you knew that personWhat do you want to tell that personTell how the editor can help you contact that per v. 2
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing about your newspaper that was published last month. In the Fashion & Style column of your newspaper on 16th April, one of your writers featured an international designer, Kimberly Swan. Kimberly was my childhood friend and we lived in the same neighborhood. Her parents decided to migrate to Britain, and since then, we have never communicated. I have been looking for ways to contact Kimberly to inform her about the recent passing of her grandmother. She was her favorite granddaughter because they have the same interest in dresses, and I am sure that Kimberly will be devastated when he hears about this unfortunate event. I would appreciate it if you can provide any information about Kimberly. If your schedule permits, we can arrange a meeting to talk about this. You can phone me at 714-485-1258. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards, Joyce Smith
Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing about your newspaper that
was published
last month.

In the Fashion
&amp
; Style column of your newspaper on 16th April, one of your writers featured an international designer,
Kimberly
Swan.
Kimberly
was my childhood
friend and
we
lived
in the same neighborhood.

Her parents decided to migrate to Britain, and since then, we have never communicated. I have been looking for ways to contact
Kimberly
to inform her about the recent passing of her grandmother. She was her favorite granddaughter
because
they have the same interest in dresses, and I am sure that
Kimberly
will
be devastated
when he hears about this unfortunate
event
.

I would appreciate it if you can provide any information about
Kimberly
. If your schedule permits, we can arrange a meeting to talk about this. You can phone me at 714-485-1258.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Best Regards,

Joyce Smith
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You saw a person that you knew in a newspaper which you have no contact for a very long time. Write to the editor and in your letter include: Tell how you knew that personWhat do you want to tell that personTell how the editor can help you contact that per v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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