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Write a complaint letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say– When did you use the service? – What was wrong with the service provided? – What actions for improvement do you suggest? v.2

Write a complaint letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say– When did you use the service? – What was wrong with the service provided? – What actions for improvement do you suggest? v. 2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction for the mid-night cab service provided by your organization. A few days back on the 4th October my car had gone for servicing due to which I had decided to use your transport services as they are very reliable and cost effective. However, I was startled when a sat inside the cab. Firstly, it was a mini car at a price of a sedan. The interiors were not maintained and even worst was that the car lock was not working. Also, the seat was full of stains and the driver was not co-operative. Unfortunately, due to all these issues I could not reach my destination on time. Hence, I would like to advice that there should be soft skills training provided to your drivers. Furthermore, each taxi should have a feedback form which would help your company to evaluate the problems and resolve it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jessica Ayri
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction for the mid-night cab service provided by your organization.

A few days back on the 4th October my car had gone for servicing due to which I had decided to
use
your transport services as they are
very
reliable and cost effective.

However
, I
was startled
when a sat inside the cab.
Firstly
, it was a mini car at a price of a sedan. The interiors were not maintained and even worst was that the car lock was not working.
Also
, the seat was full of stains and the driver was not co-operative.

Unfortunately, due to all these issues I could not reach my destination on time.
Hence
, I would like to advice that there should be soft
skills
training provided to your drivers.
Furthermore
, each taxi should have a feedback form which would
help
your
company
to evaluate the problems and resolve it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jessica
Ayri
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a complaint letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say– When did you use the service? – What was wrong with the service provided? – What actions for improvement do you suggest? v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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