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Write a letter to local suthorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area Mention about the current sport facilities available what kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced how the new sports facilitie v.2

Write a letter to local suthorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area Mention about the current sport facilities available what kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced how the new sports facilitie v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request you to install additional sports provisisons for people between 25 to 30 years in our locality. Currently/Presently, the only sports available in our locality are mini golf and chess. These games are mostly played and enyoyed by older people. However, there are sports facilities available for the younger generation which they can play after their office hours. I would request you to kindly include extra sporting equipments such as badminton, cricket and lawn tennis in our colony which are more suitable for the office goers. These sports games are suitable for working people because of hours of working in office completing the projects within the deadline. By playing these sports they can not only reduce their stress level but also can keep them physically and mentally fit. I hope you will take my suggestion into consideration and will take immediate action. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, prabhpreet Kaur.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request you to install additional
sports
provisisons
for
people
between 25 to 30
years in our locality.

Currently
/
Presently
, the
only
sports
available in our locality are mini golf and chess. These games are
mostly
played and
enyoyed
by older
people
.
However
, there are
sports
facilities available for the younger generation which they can play after their office hours.

I would request you to kindly include extra sporting equipments such as badminton, cricket and lawn tennis in our colony which are more suitable for the office goers.

These
sports
games are suitable for working
people
because
of hours of working in office completing the projects within the deadline. By playing these
sports
they can not
only
reduce
their
stress
level
but
also
can
keep
them
physically
and mentally fit.

I hope you will take my suggestion into consideration and will take immediate action.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Thanking you,

Yours
faithfully
,

prabhpreet
Kaur
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to local suthorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area Mention about the current sport facilities available what kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced how the new sports facilitie v. 2

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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