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You forgot a travelling document in a taxi. Write to the cab office to have the documents sent to you. v.1

You forgot a travelling document in a taxi. Write to the cab office to have the documents sent to you. v. 1
Dear Mr. David, I am writing to inform you about my recent loss. I boarded a taxi at your Maryland terminus, on the 15th of April, 2019 and I mistakenly left my travelling documents onboard. It was actually a brown envelope which contains, an International passport, e-ticket and some other travel-related documents. Needless to say, these papers are very crucial to me because I am supposed to travel to Belgium for an important conference, on the 20th of April, 2019. This meeting is very imperative to my promotion at work and it is a life-time opportunity which I cannot afford to miss. To start with, help me check with the taxi driver who was on duty on the said date and confirm if he has by any chance kept the documents for me or turned it in at the " Lost and Found" section. Give me a call if found, and I will send a check to have the documents mailed to me. Thank you dear your anticipated assistance and I hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Valentina Jones
Dear Mr. David,

I am writing to inform you about my recent loss. I boarded a taxi at your Maryland terminus, on the 15th of
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "April 2019".
April, 2019
and I
mistakenly
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left
my travelling documents onboard. It was actually a brown envelope which contains, an International passport, e-ticket and
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some
other travel-related documents.

Needless to say, these papers are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
crucial to me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I
am supposed
to travel to Belgium for an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
conference, on the 20th of
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "April 2019".
April, 2019
. This meeting is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
imperative to my promotion at work and it is a life-time opportunity which I cannot afford to miss.

To
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start
with,
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help
me
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check
with the taxi driver who was on duty on the said date and confirm if he has by any chance
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
the documents for me or turned it in at the
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&quot
; Lost and
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Found&quot
; section.

Give me a call if found, and I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
to have the documents mailed to me.

Thank you dear your anticipated assistance and I hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Valentina Jones
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You forgot a travelling document in a taxi. Write to the cab office to have the documents sent to you. v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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