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IELTS General Training - Writing Task 1Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A)Introduce yourself, B)Explain what the problem is, C)Suggest solutions v.1

IELTS General Training - Writing Task 1Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A)Introduce yourself, B)Explain what the problem is, C)Suggest solutions v. 1
Dear Sir, Madam By way of introduction, my name is Aida Serikova and I live in house 4 in Kenesary Street. I bought this flat, because I was attracted by its location in a pristine and residential street. Yet my positive living experience didn' t last long. I am writing to complaint about the constant noise coming from the construction work on the parallel street. It seems the work is carried out 24 hours. I have a small baby who is not able to fall asleep due to the load construction noise at night. Lack of sleep stresses the whole family out. I' m sure there are other families affected by the noise. Can you please speak with the company and agree on the timing for major work to be carried out. Particularly, no construction from 8pm to 9am. If required, I am ready to represent the voice of other families in the discussion. If you do not take this forward to resolve, I will have to raise my concern with the local authorities including the police. We may not need to escalate the issue as I have full confidence that you will take care of the complaint and do everything what' s required to resolve the situation. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you soon. Regards, Aida
Dear Sir, Madam

By way of introduction, my name is Aida
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Serikova
and I
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live
in
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house
4 in
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Kenesary
Street. I
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bought
this flat,
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because
I
was attracted
by its location in a pristine and residential street.
Yet
my
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positive
living experience
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didn&
#039; t last long.

I am writing to complaint about the constant noise coming from the construction work on the parallel street. It seems the work
is carried
out 24 hours. I have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
baby who is not able to fall asleep due to the load construction noise at night. Lack of sleep
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stresses
the whole family out.
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I&
#039; m sure there are other families
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affected
by the noise.

Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
speak with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
on the timing for major work to
be carried
out.
Particularly
, no construction from 8pm to 9am. If required, I am ready to represent the voice of other families in the discussion. If you do not take this forward to resolve, I will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
raise my concern with the local authorities including the police.

We may not need to escalate the issue as I have full confidence that you will take care of the complaint and do everything
Possible spelling mistake found.
what&
#039; s required to resolve the situation.

I look forward to hearing a
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positive
response from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Regards,

Aida
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter IELTS General Training - Writing Task 1Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A)Introduce yourself, B)Explain what the problem is, C)Suggest solutions v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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