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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.17

With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 17
In today’s era of technological development, the paper books are being replaced by electronic books. While some people supported that this development will benefit the society, others argued that this will bring the bad things. In this essay, the pros and cons of the development e-books will be explained. There are numerous advantages for increasing popularity of e-books. Firstly, e-books can reduce the usage of papers which offers a clean and sustainable solution for the world since hundreds of thousands of trees are sacrificed for paper productions every years. They are also easy to access from different mobile equipment such as smartphones, tablets, laptops, etc. For instance, instead of buying a newspaper, people can read news from the phones while travelling on the bus or train. Despite of their benefits, the drawbacks of e-books should not also be neglected. The main disadvantage is the copy-right control which is important to protect the intellectual properties of authors. Moreover, technological advancement on controlling copy-right materials is still not trustworthy that the authors and producers will suffer in long term e-book business. Because of this effect, the writing becomes less popular among the teenagers since it is believed not to be a rewarding career pathway in 21st century and it is threatening the creativity of upcoming authors generation. To conclude, even though e-books have huge advantages on the environment and accessibility, they fail to protect the book creators. With the development of e-books, the technologists should develop a steady tool to protect the creations from being stolen by the hackers.
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today
’s era of technological
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development
, the paper books are
being replaced
by electronic books. While
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some
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people
supported that this
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development
will benefit the society, others argued that this will bring the
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bad
things. In this essay, the pros and cons of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
e-books will be
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explained
.

There are numerous advantages for increasing popularity of e-books.
Firstly
, e-books can
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reduce
the usage of papers which offers a clean and sustainable solution for the world since hundreds of thousands of trees
are sacrificed
for paper productions every
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years
. They are
also
easy to access from
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different
mobile equipment such as smartphones, tablets, laptops, etc.
For instance
,
instead
of buying a newspaper,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can read news from the phones while travelling on the bus or train.

Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
Despite of
their benefits, the drawbacks of e-books should not
also
be neglected
. The main disadvantage is the copy-right control which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to protect the intellectual properties of authors.
Moreover
, technological advancement on controlling copy-right materials is
still
not trustworthy that the authors and producers will suffer in long term e-book business.
Because of this
effect, the writing becomes less popular among the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
since it
is believed
not to be a rewarding career pathway in 21st century and it is threatening the creativity of upcoming authors generation.

To conclude
,
even though
e-books have huge advantages on the environment and accessibility, they fail to protect the book creators. With the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
of e-books, the technologists should develop a steady tool to protect the creations from
being stolen
by the hackers.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 17

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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