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1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products? ” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. v.2

1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products? ” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. v. 2
1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products? ” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. Over packaging of the products have become a trend these days and also a medium to attract consumers with more attractive packaging. Following this trend producers often forget the detrimental effects it has on both environment and consumers, which is one of the main concerns because of which the consumers need to make an informed decision about the products they buy. Packaging’s can often be deceiving, and lead customers to have an utterly contrasting view about the product than what it actually is. Over packing increases the price of the product which is then again taken from the consumers. There have been cases where the cost of packaging is more than the cost of the product itself. Moreover, manufacturers often use non-disposable wrappers and packets which adds to the effects on the environment. There are some reasonable arguments in favour of over packaging as well, because the more attractive a package looks these days the more people prefer it and hence packaging becomes a significant factor for selling more. Survey suggests that sales have increased by seventeen percent just because of attractive packaging for many companies. Also, for keeping some products intact and fresh it is sometimes necessary to use over packaging, for example, in the case of some biscuit packs, we can see that the biscuits are placed in the small plastic tray and covered with multiple layers of packets. In such cases manufacturers can argue stating that over packaging is being done for the benefit of customers. In the end, undoubtedly, extra packaging of products has a detrimental effect on the society; however, consumers should avoid over-packaged products to solve the negative effects it possessed to them and to the environment which will in turn clout manufacturers to change the way they are packing products.
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consumers
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over
packaged
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products
or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra
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packaging
of
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products
? ” Give your views or any relevant example with your
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own
experience.

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packaging
of the
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products
have become a trend these days and
also
a medium to attract
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consumers
with more attractive
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packaging
. Following this trend producers
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often
forget the detrimental effects it has on both environment and
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consumers
, which is one of the main concerns
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because
of which the
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consumers
need to
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make
an informed decision about the
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products
they
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buy
.

Packaging’s can
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often
be deceiving, and lead customers to have an
utterly
contrasting view about the
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product
than what it actually is.
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Over
packing increases the price of the
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product
which is then again taken from the
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consumers
. There have been cases where the cost of
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packaging
is more than the cost of the
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product
itself.
Moreover
, manufacturers
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often
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use
non-disposable wrappers and packets which
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adds
to the effects on the environment.

There are
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some
reasonable arguments in
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favour
of
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over
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packaging
as well
,
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because
the more attractive a package looks these days the more
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people
prefer it and
hence
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packaging
becomes a significant factor for selling more. Survey suggests that sales have increased by seventeen percent
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just
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because
of attractive
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for
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many
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companies
.
Also
, for keeping
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some
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products
intact and fresh it is
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sometimes
necessary to
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use
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over
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packaging
,
for example
, in the case of
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some
biscuit packs, we can
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see
that the biscuits
are placed
in the
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small
plastic tray and covered with multiple layers of packets. In such cases manufacturers can argue stating that
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over
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packaging
is
being done
for the benefit of customers.

In the
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end
,
undoubtedly
, extra
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packaging
of
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products
has a detrimental
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effect
on the society;
however
,
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consumers
should avoid over-packaged
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products
to solve the
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negative
effects it possessed to them and to the environment which will in turn clout manufacturers to
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change
the way they are packing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS letter 1. Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products? ” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience. v. 2

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
333 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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