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Your friend has asked you to help him to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher haswhy you think he/she is suitablehow to ge v.1

Your friend has asked you to help him to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher haswhy you think he/she is suitablehow to ge v. 1
Deae Dave, Hope this letter finds you in the radiant of health and the best of spirits. Well, I' m just writing to infrom you that I' ve found the music teacher you were lokking for your daughter. To be honest, she is one of our companions from the high school. Did yiu remember Lisa ray? I recently bumped into her at one of the coffee shops in downtown. We' d a long chat and she told me about her employment in the Toronto high school as a music instructor from last five years. What' s more, she even houses a group of pupils at her home every weekend to give them music lessons. I thought it would be a good idea to have someone known to teach your daughter. On the top of that, it might give you comfort that she is in safe hands. Also, she charges a marginal fee of 50$ per week, which is quite reasonable as compared to others. you can reach her at 4125515242 anytime after 5 PM. Besides that, you can even add her on Faceebok and send a message. I' ve already informed her that you might contact her soon. just write back to me if you need any other help. best wishes, Ram
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Dave,

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remember Lisa ray? I recently bumped into her at one of the coffee shops in downtown.
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me about her employment in the Toronto high school as a music instructor from last five years.
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a group of pupils at her home every weekend to give them music lessons.

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thought
it would be a
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good
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idea
to have someone known to teach your daughter. On the top of that, it might give you comfort that she is in safe hands.
Also
, she charges a marginal fee of
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50$
per week, which is quite reasonable as compared to others.

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you
can reach her at 4125515242 anytime after 5 PM.
Besides
that, you can even
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her on
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Faceebok
and
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send
a message.
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I&
#039; ve already informed her that you might contact her
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soon
.

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just
write back to me if you need any other
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help
.

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best
wishes,

Ram
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your friend has asked you to help him to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher haswhy you think he/she is suitablehow to ge v. 1

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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