Dear Mr. Smith,
First of all, let me thank you for giving such an excellent job opportunity. I am writing this letter to seek extended assistance from you.
As you already know, I am new to New Zealand as a matter of fact; this is my first aboard work location. On that account, could you please provide me further insights about the place. These details are imperative for not only settling but also to lead my life in harmony.
First, I would like to know about the public transport system to commute to the workplace. Secondly, are there any Indian grocery shops or restaurants near to our office? Furthermore, can I get a travel guide book or a website that contains top tourist destinations?
I request you take this as a priority subject. Can you please confirm the preferred mode of correspondence how and when can I can have these particulars; would it be either through email or by a phone call? Do let me know, if necessary I will text you my local phone number.
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
Dear Mr. Smith,
First of all
,
let
me thank you for giving such an excellent job opportunity. I am writing this letter to seek extended assistance from you.
As you already know, I am new to New Zealand as a matter of fact; this is my
first
aboard work location. On that account, could you
please
provide me
further
insights about the place. These
details
are imperative for not
only
settling
but
also
to lead my life in harmony.
First
, I would like to know about the public transport system to commute to the workplace.
Secondly
, are there any Indian grocery shops or restaurants near to our office?
Furthermore
, can I
get
a travel guide book or a website that contains top tourist destinations?
I request you take this as a priority subject. Can you
please
confirm the preferred mode of correspondence how and when can I can have these particulars; would it be either through email or by a phone call? Do
let
me know
, if
necessary I will text you my local phone number.
I look forward to your response.
Yours
sincerely
,
Sudheerkumar
Motakatla
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