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The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.
The two pie charts illustrate the global population percentagewise over the duration of a century, from 1900 to 2000. Overall, Asia comprises the most of the world' s population both at the beginning and at the end of the period. In contrast, other countries contribute the least percentage to the global statistic. The total figure by the end of the century grows several-fold. In 1900, Asia constitutes 60% of the global population, the largest region to do so. However, this figure declines slightly by 6% over the next hundred years. Europe, despite making up a quarter of the population at the beginning of the period, suffers the most significant drop over time, hitting a low of 14%. North America and other countries experience no change in numbers, remaining constant at 5 and 3%, respectively. On the other hand, Africa' s contribution to the worldwide statistic increases from 4 to 10% by the end of the century, as did Latin America' s. Interestingly, by 2000, the Middle East and North Africa account for 6% of the planet' s populace, a figure that is notably absent in 1900. The total population rises drastically from 1. 6 to 6 billion by the beginning of the 21st century.
The two pie charts illustrate the global
population
percentagewise
over the duration of a century, from 1900 to 2000.

Overall
, Asia comprises the most of the
world&
#039; s
population
both at the beginning and at the
end
of the period.
In contrast
, other countries contribute the least percentage to the global statistic. The total figure by the
end
of the century grows several-fold.

In 1900, Asia constitutes 60% of the global
population
, the largest region to do
so
.
However
, this figure declines
slightly
by 6% over the
next
hundred years. Europe, despite making up a quarter of the
population
at the beginning of the period, suffers the most significant drop over time, hitting a low of 14%. North America and other countries experience no
change
in numbers, remaining constant at 5 and 3%,
respectively
.

On the other hand
,
Africa&
#039; s contribution to the worldwide statistic increases from 4 to 10% by the
end
of the century, as did Latin
America&
#039; s.
Interestingly
, by 2000, the Middle East and North Africa account for 6% of the
planet&
#039; s populace, a figure
that is
notably
absent in 1900. The total
population
rises
drastically
from 1. 6 to 6 billion by the beginning of the 21st century.
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IELTS letter The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.

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