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The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comp v.6

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
The first bar chart Illustrates the ratio of population owing computers in 2002 to 2010. In addition, the other one describes the same with the different academic groups of people During the same time period. It is clear that the number of population having ownership of our computer is gradually increasing from past years. In the first chart, the proportion of people having computer kept on going Up by 5% in a period of two years. As it shows, In 2002 the statistics were 55% and finally ending at 75% in 2010. Moreover, in the second chart Education level was added. According to it, People with less education had few computers. Also, As the level of academic achievement increased, the percentage of computer owing population also grew step by step. The most number of owners belong from University level education such as bachelors or post graduate. In higher studies, 90% students had computers. Although, The growth rate was gradual, There was significant addition in numbers During the transfer of students from school to college level academics.
The
first
bar chart Illustrates the ratio of population owing computers in 2002 to 2010.
In addition
, the other one
describes
the same with the
different
academic groups of
people
During the same time period. It is
clear
that the number of population having ownership of our computer is
gradually
increasing from past years.

In the
first
chart, the proportion of
people
having computer
kept
on going Up by 5% in a period of two years. As it
shows
, In 2002 the statistics were 55% and
finally
ending at 75% in 2010.

Moreover
, in the second chart Education
level
was
added
. According to it,
People
with less education had few computers.
Also
, As the
level
of academic achievement increased, the percentage of computer owing population
also
grew step by step. The most number of owners belong from University
level
education such as bachelors or post graduate. In higher studies, 90% students had computers. Although, The growth rate was gradual, There was significant addition in numbers During the transfer of students from school to college
level
academics.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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