The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comp v.6
The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. 
The first bar chart Illustrates the ratio of population owing computers in 2002 to 2010. In addition, the other one describes the same with the different academic groups of people During the same time period. It is clear that the number of population having ownership of our computer is gradually increasing from past years.
In the first chart, the proportion of people having computer kept on going Up by 5% in a period of two years. As it shows, In 2002 the statistics were 55% and finally ending at 75% in 2010.
Moreover, in the second chart Education level was added. According to it, People with less education had few computers. Also, As the level of academic achievement increased, the percentage of computer owing population also grew step by step. The most number of owners belong from University level education such as bachelors or post graduate. In higher studies, 90% students had computers. Although, The growth rate was gradual, There was significant addition in numbers During the transfer of students from school to college level academics. 
The  
first
 bar chart Illustrates the ratio of population owing computers in 2002 to 2010.  
In addition
, the other one  
describes
 the same with the  
different
 academic groups of  
people
 During the same time period. It is  
clear
 that the number of population having ownership of our computer is  
gradually
 increasing from past years.
In the  
first
 chart, the proportion of  
people
 having computer  
kept
 on going Up by 5% in a period of two years. As it  
shows
, In 2002 the statistics were 55% and  
finally
 ending at 75% in 2010. 
Moreover
, in the second chart Education  
level
 was  
added
. According to it,  
People
 with less education had few computers.  
Also
, As the  
level
 of academic achievement increased, the percentage of computer owing population  
also
 grew step by step. The most number of owners belong from University  
level
 education such as bachelors or post graduate. In higher studies, 90% students had computers. Although, The growth rate was gradual, There was significant addition in numbers During the transfer of students from school to college  
level
 academics. 
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