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You have orderes cheque book bofore fifteen days bur still you have not received it. Write a letter to bank manager with dissatisfaction to service. Mention-When and how you requestAsk how much time it will takeShare anhy action to solve it v.2

You have orderes cheque book bofore fifteen days bur still you have not received it. Write a letter to bank manager with dissatisfaction to service. Mention-When and how you requestAsk how much time it will takeShare anhy action to solve it v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the request which has been pending since last fifteen days and ask you to take appropriate action to solve it urgently. Actually, I need cheque book routinely for payments to my clients. Before 2 weeks I have requested for the new one on the online portal of bank. The service request number is AAA2345. The fifteen days were gone; however, still I have not received either new cheque book or any response from your side, that surprised me a lot. Kindly share with me an approximately time till what I will receive it, so that I can communicate with my customers accordingly. I would appreciate if you could take a prompt measure to solve this pending issue since long time. if it takes longer time, then please arrange to send a cheque book without my name printed on cheque as I need it on urgent base. Hope you would understand seriousness of this dissatisfactory service and take a quick action to resolve it. Yours faithfully, James Karle
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the request which has been pending since last fifteen days and ask you to take appropriate action to solve it
urgently
.

Actually, I need
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
book
routinely
for payments to my clients.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
2 weeks I have requested for the new one on the online portal of bank. The service request number is AAA2345. The fifteen days
were gone
;
however
,
still
I have not received either new
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
book or any response from your side, that surprised me a lot.

Kindly share with me an
You used an adverb ('approximately') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('time') instead of another adjective.
approximately time
till what I will receive it,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can communicate with my customers
accordingly
.

I would appreciate if you could take a prompt measure to solve this pending issue since long time.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
if
it takes longer time, then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
arrange to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
book without my name printed on
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
as I need it on urgent base.

Hope you would understand seriousness of this
Possible spelling mistake found.
dissatisfactory
service and take a quick action to resolve it.

Yours
faithfully
,

James
Possible spelling mistake found.
Karle
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS letter You have orderes cheque book bofore fifteen days bur still you have not received it. Write a letter to bank manager with dissatisfaction to service. Mention-When and how you requestAsk how much time it will takeShare anhy action to solve it v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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