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A friend (Ms Sara) of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do th v.1

A friend (Ms Sara) of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do th v. 1
Dear Sara, It is always pleasure to hear from you and I am very happy to know that you are planning a holiday in next month. I remember that last time when we mat you mentioned about you plan to visit places outside United Kingdom. I can certainly offer wisefull advice on travel. Knowing that you are pursuing a degree course in history and have interest in visiting historical places, I would recommend you to plan for India. I have been to India four times and I must say that there is still a lot to cover. As you might be aware that India is comparably much bigger county than U. K and it can’t be seen in one trip. Therefore, it is required to focus on one part and I would suggest you to consider North India this time. Delhi is capital of India and I visit every time. Also, world famous monument “The TajMahal” is just 180 km from Delhi which can be covered in a day. Though, there are many five star hotels India, you may consider “International Youth Hostel” in Delhi. The best part of being in India is to get an opportunity to tasty different styles of food. Initially British people do not like the food especially spicy one but food quality is superb and it is cheap as well. Do not forget to eat South Indian food mainly Dosa and different kinds of Chutney. I hope that you would find the information useful and share you experience from India. Love, Kalla
Dear Sara,

It is always
Consider using a past participle here: "pleasured".
pleasure
to hear from
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you and
I am
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very
happy to know that you are planning a holiday in
next
month. I remember that last
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time
when
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we mat
you
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mentioned about you
plan to visit places
A determiner is probably missing here: "outside the United Kingdom".
outside United Kingdom
. I can
certainly
offer
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wisefull
advice on travel.

Knowing that you are pursuing a degree course in history and have interest in visiting historical places, I would recommend you to plan for India. I have been to India four
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
and I
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must
say that there is
still
a lot to cover. As you might be aware that India is
comparably
much bigger county than U. K and it can’t be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in one trip.
Therefore
, it
is required
to focus on one part and I would suggest you to consider North India this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. Delhi is capital of India and I visit every
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time
.
Also
, world
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famous
monument “The
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TajMahal
” is
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just
180 km from Delhi which can
be covered
in a day. Though, there are
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many
'five star' is missing a hyphen.
five star
hotels India, you may consider “International Youth Hostel” in Delhi.

The best part of being in India is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an opportunity to tasty
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
styles of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
Initially
British
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people
do not like the
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food
especially
spicy one
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but
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food
quality is superb and it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
as well
. Do not forget to eat South Indian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
mainly
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Dosa
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
kinds of Chutney.

I hope that you would find the information useful and share you experience from India.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

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Kalla
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend (Ms Sara) of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do th v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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