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Write them an Letter about the problem. · Explain why deadlines are important· Describe the effect on other staff of not meeting deadlines· Suggest what they should do about the situation v.2

Write them an Letter about the problem. · Explain why deadlines are important· Describe the effect on other staff of not meeting deadlines· Suggest what they should do about the situation v. 2
Dear Sai, I would like to inform you that ' Santoor' advertisement shoot is not yet completed which is a high priority task as we discussed on last week. As you knew that our agency is a one of the promisable agency in the city. We usually do deliverables on time which is a major factor for customer had a positive feedback on us. On last month, I assigned you a " Santoor" promotion which I was expected to complete by this week. But, I heard that it is partially done. I am really disappointed about you work. This is not a first time about you performance. Customer is expecting to finish complete shooting as soon as possible. We already delayed for a week. I got a lot of escalation emails from high authority team as well. So, I am expecting you to finish the task by end of this week or else we have to give a proper explanation to them which is really bad impression to our team. Please feel free to contact me if you are facing any issue. Thank you. Yours sincerely,
Dear
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Sai
,

I would like to inform you that '
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Santoor&
#039; advertisement shoot is not
yet
completed which is a high priority task as we discussed on last week.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you knew that our agency is a one of the
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promisable
agency in the city. We
usually
do deliverables on time which is a major factor for customer had a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feedback on us. On last month, I assigned you a
Possible spelling mistake found.
&quot
;
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Santoor&quot
; promotion which I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to complete by this week.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, I heard that it is
partially
done. I am
really
disappointed about you work. This is not a
first
time about you performance.

Customer is expecting to finish complete shooting as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible. We already delayed for a week. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
escalation emails from high authority team
as well
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I am expecting you to finish the task by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this week or else we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
give a proper explanation to them which is
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
impression to our team.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
feel free to contact me if you are facing any issue. Thank you.

Yours
sincerely
,
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS letter Write them an Letter about the problem. · Explain why deadlines are important· Describe the effect on other staff of not meeting deadlines· Suggest what they should do about the situation v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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