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you have a extra room an appartment and would you like to rent it out to your stutents. Write a letter to university council officer and say1. describe your appartment and the facilities available2. why do you want to rent out room3. what kind of tenet would v.2

you have a extra room an appartment and would you like to rent it out to your stutents. Write a letter to university council officer and say1. describe your appartment and the facilities available2. why do you want to rent out room3. what kind of tenet would v. 2
Dear sir, I am drafting to inform you that I am looking for a tenat to my 1bk apartment. Also, my preferable is our students who are all currently looking for arented house outside. To begin wiyh, my apartment total square feet is 900 and which one is available on 2 nd floor. Also lift is available. Mainly, people are looking for furnished house and which already we have set it up in my house. Earlier my brother is planning to stay in my appartment due to to his intenship but unfortunately he is moving to mumbai for his project in order to this I am planning torent it out I am looking for two to three students who can share my appartment and total rent is INR7000 per anum and total advance is 30000. Also I am looking for a final year students so that next year they can vocate my appartment and before my brother come to bangalore. i hope at the earliest reply form you soon. yours sincerely, john.
Dear sir,

I am drafting to inform you that I am
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looking
for a
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tenat
to my 1bk apartment.
Also
, my preferable is our students who are all
currently
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looking
for
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arented
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house
outside.

To
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begin
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wiyh
, my apartment total square feet is 900 and which one is available on
Did you mean "2nd"?
2 nd
floor.
Also
lift is available.
Mainly
,
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people
are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
looking
for furnished
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and which already we have set it up in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Earlier my brother is planning to stay in my
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appartment
due
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to to
his
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intenship
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but
unfortunately he is moving to
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mumbai
for his project in order to this I am planning
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torent
it out

I am
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looking
for two to three students who can share my
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appartment
and total rent is INR7000 per
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anum
and total advance is 30000.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I am
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looking
for a final year students
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so
that
next
year they can
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vocate
my
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appartment
and
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before
my brother
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come
to
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bangalore
.

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
hope at the earliest reply form you
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soon
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
yours
sincerely
,

john.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes
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IELTS letter you have a extra room an appartment and would you like to rent it out to your stutents. Write a letter to university council officer and say1. describe your appartment and the facilities available2. why do you want to rent out room3. what kind of tenet would v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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