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You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to you friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: •say what you enjoyed at the dinner•describe how you feel about his/her family•invite your friend and hi v.2

You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to you friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: •say what you enjoyed at the dinner•describe how you feel about his/her family•invite your friend and hi v. 2
Dear Susan, Hope you are doing great with your health and spirit. I am writing this letter to invite you and your family to my party in the garden of my house. Last weekend, I had a good time in my life because the first time, I have dinner with a friend’s family. I had attended a lot of activities such as sing songs, play games and so on. Most of the things that I had eaten some foods made by your mother which is extremely delicious. Besides, when I joined your family in your warm house, I feel comfortable and relaxed. Your parent is extremely good, your brother very funny and your puppy is so cute. They also made me feel happier when giving me a gift that I was very like. The last of things, for thank your dinner I would invite you and your family to my house next weekend. I will prepare a big party to make you satisfied. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Tom
Dear Susan,

Hope you are doing great with your health and spirit. I am writing this letter to invite you and your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
to my party in the garden of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Last weekend, I had a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time in my life
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because
the
first
time, I have dinner with a friend’s
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family
. I had attended
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a lot of
activities such as sing songs, play games and
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so
on. Most of the things that I had eaten
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some
foods made by your mother which is
extremely
delicious.

Besides
, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
in your warm
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, I feel comfortable and relaxed. Your parent is
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
, your brother
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
funny
and your puppy is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
cute. They
also
made me feel happier when giving me a gift that I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
like.

The last of things, for thank your dinner I would invite you and your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
next
weekend. I will prepare a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
party to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you satisfied.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Tom
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS letter You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to you friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should: •say what you enjoyed at the dinner•describe how you feel about his/her family•invite your friend and hi v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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