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A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend. Write to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend you can't come Explain why you are unable to attend Arrange another time to meet v.4

A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend. Write to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend you can't come Explain why you are unable to attend Arrange another time to meet v. 4
Dear Anna, I just wanted to say thanks for the invite - I would have loved to come, but I' m not going to be in town next weekend. you remember my cousin Jason? Well, he' s getting married and the wedding is in London, so I' ll be away for three days. Perhaps we could catch up when I get back? we could go to that new restaurant that' s just opened on Queen St. - one of the people I work with went there a few weeks ago and says it' s really good. it' s about time we caught up – it must be at least 6 months since I saw you and I have some exciting news to tell you about my job! Anyway, hope you have a good party - I' m sure you will as your parties are always good fun! I remember the new years Eve party at your house three years ago – it was one of the best parties I' ve been to! All the best, Mary
Dear Anna,

I
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wanted to say thanks for the invite
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I would have
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loved
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,
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but
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next
weekend.
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you
remember my cousin Jason? Well,
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#039; s getting married and the wedding is in London,
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#039; ll be away for three days.

Perhaps we could catch up when I
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get
back?
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we
could go to that new restaurant
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#039; s
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just
opened on Queen St.
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one of the
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people
I work with went there a few weeks ago and says
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really
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good
.
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#039; s about time we caught up
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it
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be at least 6 months since I
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saw
you and I have
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some
exciting news to
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tell
you about my job!

Anyway, hope you have a
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good
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party
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-
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I&
#039; m sure you will as your
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parties
are always
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good
fun! I remember the
The official / recommended spelling of this holiday is: "New Year's Eve"
new years Eve
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party
at your
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house
three years ago
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it was one of the best
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parties
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I&
#039; ve been to!

All the best, Mary
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend. Write to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend you can't come Explain why you are unable to attend Arrange another time to meet v. 4

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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