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Nowadays the number of cars on road is increasing incrementally In order to change this trends strict road tolls should be paid on busy roads To what extent do you agree or disagree v.2

Nowadays the number of cars on road is increasing incrementally In order to change this trends strict road tolls should be paid on busy roads v. 2
Nowadays cars are become very popular, almost every people owned it. Earlier it was considered to be an luxury but today people see cars as a necessary addition to their life. As a result number of cars on the roads are increasing steeply, which actually creating some other issues. In order to change this increasing trend some people suggests that strict road tolls should be levied on busy roads. I completely agree with this statement. first, we should have to look in to the negative effect of this scenario. cars or in other words motor vehicles are creating so many problems. The main concern is related to it' s pollution aspect, cars are emitting carbon dioxide since they are using fossil fuels for it' s functioning. Although there are other alternatives are available majority of the motor cars on the roads are running on fossil fuels. This carbon dioxide is seriously polluting our air, as a result most of the metropolitan cities are facing this issue because of the sheer number of cars on the roads of these cities. Moreover, these vehicles are also creating sound pollution too. People are completed annoyed by the unnecessary honking and running sound of these vehicles. Furthermore, because of this huge density of vehicles there are always traffic jams and this definitely leads to loss of productive man hours in the roads. currently it is quite common that people are being stuck in the busy roads for hours helplessly. To tackle the issues created by these motor cars authorities around the world are introducing different methods. one of the popular practice is that, imposing tolls on the busy roads. which means people who use their vehicles on these busy roads should pay some fixed amount of money as usage fees. This will force people to think twice whether to use their own cars on such roads or to rely on public transport on such places. This method is proven to be successful in number countries like Singapore and USA. To conclude, large car population is the one of the major problems faced by the almost all the countries around the world. They are imposing new rules and practices to force people to withdraw their cars from the busy roads. so that they can ensure environment friendly condition on the roads.
Nowadays
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cars
are become
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very
popular, almost every
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people
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owned
it. Earlier it
was considered
to be
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an
luxury
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but
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today
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people
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see
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cars
as a necessary addition to their life.
As a result
number of
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cars
on the
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roads
are increasing
steeply
, which actually creating
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some
other issues. In order to
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change
this increasing trend
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some
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people
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suggests
that strict
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road
tolls should
be levied
on
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busy
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roads
. I completely
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agree
with this statement.

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first
, we should
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have to
look in to the
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negative
effect of this scenario.
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cars
or
in other words
motor
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vehicles
are creating
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so
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many
problems. The main concern
is related
to
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it&
#039; s pollution aspect,
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cars
are emitting carbon dioxide since they are using fossil fuels for
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it&
#039; s functioning.
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Although
there are other alternatives are available majority of the motor
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cars
on the
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roads
are running on fossil fuels. This carbon dioxide is
seriously
polluting our air,
as a result
most of the metropolitan cities are facing this issue
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because
of the sheer number of
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cars
on the
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roads
of these cities.
Moreover
, these
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vehicles
are
also
creating sound pollution too.
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People
are completed
annoyed by the unnecessary honking and running sound of these
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vehicles
.
Furthermore
,
because of this
huge density of
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vehicles
there are always traffic jams and this definitely leads to loss of productive
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man hours
in the
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roads
.
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currently
it is quite common that
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people
are
being stuck
in the
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busy
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roads
for hours
helplessly
.

To tackle the issues created by these motor
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cars
authorities around the world are introducing
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different
methods.
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one
of the popular practice is that, imposing tolls on the
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busy
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roads
.
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which
means
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people
who
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use
their
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vehicles
on these
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busy
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roads
should pay
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some
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fixed
amount of money as usage fees. This will force
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people
to
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think
twice whether to
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use
their
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own
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cars
on such
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roads
or to rely on public transport on such places. This method
is proven
to be
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successful in number
countries like Singapore and USA.

To conclude
, large
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car
population is the one of the major problems faced by the almost all the countries around the world. They are imposing new
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rules
and practices to force
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people
to withdraw their
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cars
from the
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busy
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roads
.
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so
that they can ensure environment friendly condition on the
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roads
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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IELTS letter Nowadays the number of cars on road is increasing incrementally In order to change this trends strict road tolls should be paid on busy roads v. 2

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4 paragraphs
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